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  1. Jutsu Scroll RPC Name: Yonaka Kuuri-Hyoujun Level Up RPC Name: Yonaka Kuuri-Hyoujun New Level and Experience Level 18 [0/200] Old Stats: Ninjutsu - D C B A S Genjutsu - D Taijutsu - D Seals - D C B Strength - D Speed - D C B A Intelligence - D C B A Endurance - D C Stamina - D C B A S New Stats: Ninjutsu - D C B A S Genjutsu - D C Taijutsu - D Seals - D C B Strength - D Speed - D C B A Intelligence - D C B A Endurance - D C Stamina - D C B A S Done
  2. Hey, I know you wouldn't be posting this if you didn't need the help. Unfortunately I am currently busy due to travel between the UK and the States until the second week of January. After that however I am more than willing to step up and do what is needed to help out the forum. Let me know if you guys need the help, I can try to be on the in December when I get the opportunity but I can't promise much until January.
  3. RPC Name: Yonaka Kuuri-Hyoujun Number of Scrolls: 2 Level Up RPC Name: Yonaka Kuuri-Hyoujun New Level and Experience 17 [0/200] Old Stats: Ninjutsu - D C B A S Genjutsu - D Taijutsu - D Seals - D C B Strength - D Speed - D C B A Intelligence - D C B Endurance - D Stamina - D C B A S New Stats: Ninjutsu - D C B A S Genjutsu - D Taijutsu - D Seals - D C B Strength - D Speed - D C B A Intelligence - D C B A Endurance - D C Stamina - D C B A S Is this enough to move Yona up from Jounin to Elite Jounin? Not sure how that whole system works just yet.
  4. Had it been simple weeks or several months now? Time was difficult to gauge at this point. The whispers had already begun, fleeting with every footfall. News spread quickly throughout the country, mysterious ramblings of the ghost. Cloaked in white the figure seemed to simply drift here or there, sometimes disappearing completely. It never spoke, nor interacted with anyone. It simply drifted, further and further north. In some circles the figure became quite popular, discussed in hushed tones in candlelit rooms too dark to make out anyone's face. Every account was eerily specific. A white cloaked figure, about six feet in height, bearing no face whatsoever. Words are but power individuals spread among the masses. Mir knew this well enough, perhaps that was his intention, or perhaps he was just eccentric enough he cared not to bear marks that could distinguish him from his surroundings. in the snow he was as visible as a star during a thunderstorm. By bleeding all details from his form he left others as blind to who he was as he himself had become. It took him some time, months in fact to piece together what had happened on the surface. whispers people made when they thought no one was there to listen. Hyougagakure was no more, that much was plain when first Mir tasted fresh air. The ruins were opaque, naught but ice remained of the village he knew so well. Yet the coldest feeling was left from those memories. As if seeing or experiencing a memory through someone else's eyes. No he learned the few survivors of his village had relocated, deep into the carved out heart of an ancient mountain in the north. A settlement of both Hyoujun and Hyougaans seeking shelter from the ever bitter winds of Seichi. It was a long trek north, he couldn't help but be spotted by individuals from local venue's in his path. Ah well, C'est la vie. Yamagakure. the village held all the same charms as their old home, but it was frightfully warm. At least warm for Mir. The locals would still get cold, but they would be no worse for wear. Strange, all this was built in the few years I slept. Yet none of it feels foreign. Dodging the Anbu was easy. They changed very little since he last studied them. He was also aided by his bloodline. Be it destiny or happenstance, Mir witnessed the the game children played that day. Most peculiar of all, he saw someone he had not expected to see so soon. Fate was a concept he still had not made his mind up about. It seemed so fickle and wishy washy. Yet here again he met with Miyuki, he could spot her chakra from among a crowd without hesitation or effort. She was there, every time he awoke. As Yonaka, and now as Mir. If this was not Fate, he wondered if this was to be a grand opportunity. He watched carefully as she walked slowly into the field, eyeing the ball with considerable mental fortitude. She seemed here, and yet everywhere all at once. She was strong, much stronger than he remembered. It was the only true proof he had that time had passed so dramatically. It was then she did the most odd thing. Something that almost baffled him. She kicked the ball... and laughed. "You continue to surprise me." He allowed his bloodline ability to fade away bringing his physical form back into the electromagnetic spectrum the human eye was capable of detecting. "I wonder, to whom was your laugh directed?" He stood perhaps fifty feet away cloaked in white bearing the faceless mask. Would she recognize his voice, or did she think him dead these many years?
  5. Yama Nin section. Yona just needs to reunite with his cousin Miyuki. He's been out of the world for a time since the collapse.
  6. I adjusted the radius to 50' to fall in line with a C rank ability.
  7. No worries that's just the way it has to be. I'll get all the edits in today when I get home.
  8. So I need to remove languages my character previously knew?
  9. So you would suggest removing the range for this jutsu and extending it up to a B rank slot?
  10. - I will edit the inventory section - Faliscan is a clan language - I wanted to keep Ex-Hyougaan as he would still be of that village. He hasn't chosen Bandless or the new frost village yet. I wanted to do this in character - I thought techniques carried over if the user already knew them before the new system changes - Yes I will replace them if needed Thank you for looking over my profile. I appreciate it.
  11. Isn't the distance for the b rank in miles though?
  12. Oh I am sorry about that. I must have misread what Enkou told me. I thought it was only clan/bloodline jutsu that were one at a time when re-applying for all of my old jutsu's. These are the final two jutsu needed for my profile to be completed.
  13. Edited in. Thanks for the advice. Sometimes its hard to put everything down exactly as I see it. Hopefully this should be more in line with what I thought up and what is balanced for this tier
  14. The distorted image would make it impossible to see. Imagine 4 eyes all seeing different images. The picture would be blurred beyond comprehension. So moving would not only make the justu fail but it would also render the user blind for several seconds.
  15. I agree it is a far more powerful version than Chakra Sensory. However the two are separate as Echo Location requires the user to stand still while using it. This is not a technique used for combat.
  16. Yonaka is ready for review. There are three things still being reviewed for this character in Jutsu and Weapons, however everything else should be completed.
  17. Name: Wire Assembly Class: Personal Rank: B Size: Length: 8" Width: 5" Height: 2.75" Weight: 5 lbs when empty, 15 lbs full Appearance: Craftsmanship is clearly an art. To make something so complex seem so simple to the eye is an art form saved seldom for anything but sleight of hand. However the small metallic brackets that make up the wire assembly are so simply in design they often fool the observer. In truth the pair of wire assemblies that Yonaka wears are difficult to see when he wears long sleeves. The assemblies are low profile and take up very little room. They are however not invisible, a keen eye can spot wider wrists and the small protrusion on the inside seam of Yonaka's arms. The assemblies are made up of several working parts, these allow for 5 separate spools of 100' wires to be inserted and unraveled upon the assembly without tangling. There are cut mechanisms in case of jamming, ejection buttons for quick unloading and reloading of spools and each wire spools is set up so that one end sits flush upon Yonaka's skin allowing for chakra to course through the assembly and allow for ease of use with Wire Manipulation. Upon the wrist side of the assembly are five identical blades, small arrowhead like blades with serrated edges and hooks upon the base corners. they support wire function with small holes in the center and are made up of stainless steel for better use in cold temperatures. The wires, blades and assembly are coated in a thin white polymer that make them quiet and difficult to see in the icy tundra. Specialties: - Wire Assemblies come in pairs, one for each arm - Custom equipment built specifically to support 5 separate strands of wire for Wire Manipulation - Ease of use for loading and removing used wire spools - Compatible with Wires of the Living Blood Slot Cost: B Owner: Yonaka Kuuri
  18. Name: Echo Location Rank: C Class: Personal Style: Ninjutsu Range: Medium-Long Duration: Maintainable at normal cost Requirements: 4x 10' wires, senbon attached to each wire at the end, Wire Manipulation Description: After a short row of hand seals the user grasps two wires in each hand of approximately 10 feet, at the end of each wire is a single senbon. the user activates a wire manipulation jutsu extending each wire perpendicular to the ground and at 45 degree angles so that each senbon is pointing in a different direction. the user then closes their eyes and concentrates sending high pitched chakra frequencies out from the tips of each senbon. the charka frequencies rebound when they hit chakra and give the user a detailed map of all chakra sources within a 50' radius. the senbon and wire remain afloat during the entire process of the jutsu to maximize the quality of signal and giving the user a clearer mental picture. The picture that is created in the user's head is of a varying first person view, the user's consciousness is first person but the view point can be anywhere in the area looking at anything in the area. also the user is capable of distinguishing life forms in detail, however its unlike any other sight people are used to, a tree would be distinguishable because the user could see the chakra veins going from the ground up into the air, and branching off into leaves. but like the tree you don't see the leaves just the veins of the leaves. thus animals and humans would be similar but different based on posture and chakra flow. Summary: - User extends Four wires, one in each direction with wire manipulation - concentrating on the senbon at each pole the user creates concentrated chakra emissions that map the surrounding area - upon return the emissions create a detailed map in the users head in a first person view - Requires the user to remain stationary to prevent debilitating image distortion. - Range of 50' in radius Owner: Yonaka Kuuri Hyoujun
  19. Name: Heki Hi (Piercing Ice Technique) Rank: C Class: Personal Style: Ninjutsu Range: Self Duration: Maintainable at D rank chakra cost Requirements: Hyouton Element Description: using the middle and index finger of one hand the user concentrates their elemental chakra around them. The Chakra shapes itself into a dagger almost two feet long, Though it is made of ice it will not melt. The dagger will shatter if the user stops concentrating or stops the flow of chakra to the dagger, Unlike other weapons the piercing quality of this dagger is better than that of metal. If the dagger should be cut by a stronger weapon it can be regrown to its full length. To create the dagger the user must allocate one C rank of chakra to his fingers, to maintain the dagger the user must keep a slight amount of concentration on the dagger and allocate one D rank of chakra per post after the first. To regrow the blade the user must use one extra D rank of chakra in addition to the maintenance cost. Summary: - Creates a 3' long blade of ice surrounding first two fingers. - Piercing quality is greater than that of metal daggers - Cutting quality is below that of metal daggers Owner: Yonaka Kuuri Hyoujun
  20. Not quite yet. Getting there but I have a few more things to app before He's ready.
  21. Yes the cast time is equivalent. Instead of doing handseals the user simply fades from existence, purely aesthetic but poignant. Thanks for catching that.
  22. Edits have been made. Let me know what you think about it now. It seems much more in line with the Global version though it has a Hyoujun flair and unique strengths/weaknesses apart from simple invisibility.
  23. They are both jutsu specifically designed for use with the bacteria that manifests itself upon the skin of all hyoujun. When in an environment that is not specifically of their natural climate the heat cold kicks in. This cold makes it impossible for them to manifest any bloodline abilities and significantly weakens the user. There are work arounds however even in these work arounds -such as water manipulation over the skin to reduce body temperature- bloodline abilities are still impossible. I'll work on this tomorrow and get everything sorted for two different abilities. If there are any other edits we need to clarify please let me know.
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