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#1 Yuudai Aki

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 07:44 PM

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Name: Yuudai Aki

Age: 15


Gender: Male

Height: 5'6"

Weight: 144 Lbs

Suiton (Water Release)

Fuuton (Wind Release)

Common with a Rikuhuu Accent

Fluent Rikuhuu

Yuudai is an average height teenager, with somewhat cold features for a boy his age. He is your standard, almost five feet, six inches tall boy, weighing around 140 pounds. He has messy, average length, white hair -in which most believe that it is dyed, but it is in fact a birth defect. He has round, blue eyes, always looking either completely expressionless or as if he is looking through a Void; they can be at times even emotionless. His body is well built, as he has been training in martial arts, and the arts of Shinobi ever since he was a child, never had the chance to study it officially though. His muscle tone is above average, but yet, he is not considered muscular. His skin tone is a light Midtone-Caucasian, with a tattoo on the left side of his chest which is the Symbol of the North Star, made in different shades of Blue and Black, with cicles representing the Lunar Cycle and the Planetary Cycle, Amaterasu has once told him that this was the symbol of her Squad when she was a Shinobi more than 50 years ago, and now, Yuudai's grandmother is the sole survivor of that Squad. She has always that the North Star will be looking over for Yuudai and guiding him, like it did for her in the past. The shockingly, even to his grandmother, when he uses Suiton Ninjutsu, the blue part of the Tattoo starts glowing, but being hidden under a shirt, no one really notices it, only Yuudai and his grandmother knew about this. Yuudai's attire is almost completely black. He wears a sleeveless, black shirt, while being white on the inside. He also puts on dark-grey pants, with white bandage tied around his right thigh, over the pants, and on this bandage he ties on his Projectiles Pouch.



Class: Shinobi

Rank: Academy Student

Village: Kawagakure, The Village Hidden In The River


Level: Lvl. 1 [0/25 EXP]

Ninjutsu D C
Genjutsu D
Taijutsu D
Seals D
Strength D
Speed D
Intelligence D
Endurance D
Stamina D
D Rank Missions: 0
C Rank Missions: 0
B Rank Missions: 0
A Rank Missions: 0
S Rank Missions: 0

D Rank Crimes: 0
C Rank Crimes: 0
B Rank Crimes: 0
A Rank Crimes: 0
S Rank Crimes: 0


Yuudai was born in a regular family, both his mother and father are not Shinobi, and they never have been. The only one in Yuudai's family that has been a Shinobi, at some point of her long life, was his Grandmother Amaterasu. She quit that bloody path long before Yuudai was born; therefore, he has no knowledge of how high she ranked or how strong she really was in her days of youth. All he knew was that she was, for until the day she passed away, his first mentor and his only friend.


Yuudai was born in a warm Spring afternoon, to a very caring and loving family. Hana Aki, his mother, was a very noisy, yet a very caring housewife. She loves to joke around, prank her own husband when she gets the chance to, and loved to be around people, almost always. She had a very beautiful, energetic spirit, and a very beautiful smile that almost never leaves her face. His father, Seiji Aki, is the son of Amaterasu. He is a very kind, very naive person. He looks dull, and at times even stupid, but he always smiles and is always cheerful, never down. He owns a small grocery store in Kawagakure, inherited from his father - thus, he always has worked there, never knowing any other path.


Ever since birth, Yuudai has had his white hair, and crystal clear blue eyes. That was a little bit problematic for Yuudai as his physical features and appearance made him a very timid person, and rarely affronts people. That was also the reason why he has always been picked on since childhood, and never made a friend. At the age of six his grandmother, the former Shinobi, Amaterasu has noticed the loneliness in Yuudai's eyes, and she realized that he feels different from the other kids and has begun teaching him little by little about the Way of the Ninja.


As the years passed, and under the supervision and mentorship of his grandmother - Amaterasu, Yuudai has learned the very basic concepts of Martial Arts, building one's Stamina and Chakra and the basics of Chakra Molding. He recieved fair knowledge of the Elements and even few Military Tactics and Team Tactics. She has also taught Yuudai some survival skills, whether he is alone in the wilderness or with a group, but above all she taught him Ninjutsu. Luckily for Yuudai, his grandmother had the same Elemental Affinity he had. Old Amaterasu was just like Yuudai, a Suiton user; and a Ninjutsu specialist. But it was shocking for Yuudai's grandmother to find out, during their years of practice, that her grandson was a natural talent in Ninjutsu, having already two Elemental Affinities from the very beginning. The thing that took her years of hard work to learn and even more to perfect.


At the age of 14, Yuudai's old Amaterasu passed away with a smile in her sleep, she felt nothing, she died peacefully, unlike most Shinobi, which was unnatural. It wasn't uncertain why she was smiling, but Seiji, Yuudai's father, and his wife Hana believed that Yuudai was the reason for her smile, maybe even the reason why she managed to live the last years of her life in such peace of heart and soul. Yuudai loved her so much as well; for she was his shelter that saved him from a darkness named solitude. On her grave, he swore that he will one day honor her by becoming a strong and true Shinobi of Kawagakure, and make her proud.


Sample Post:

Yuudai has set off to an adventure, with the blessing of both his loving parents. He knew that he is a little bit old for being an Academy Student now, but he believed that there is no other way for him. He needs to pass the Academy in order to become a fully-fledged Genin of Kawagakure, that is the only way he will be allowed to wear the Village's Head protector. At the edges of the Second Shinobi University in the Land of Stone, Yuudai took a deep breath and looked up the sky, "So this is it!?" He thought as he smiled for the first time in a very long time.


He looked down the path his grandmother paved for him from the day he was barely five years old, until the day she passed away a year ago. This is the path handed down to him by the woman that became his only friend, his mentor and his idol as a Shinobi. He barely knew just the edges of her true strength, he could sense she was powerful in her days, it was clear to him that she was no normal Shinobi. "Nana... I have finally arrived! I have finally been approved... now I will become a Shinobi, I will make you proud!" He said to himself as he looked down the path paved infront of him. His eyes, his face, as they have always been, gave not a single hint of any emotion or expression.


He walked towards the gates of the University, not looking back... not even willing to give it a second thought. This day is the day his entire future changes, this day is the day he fulfills his oath given at his grandmother's headstone... and now, it all begins!

Edited by Yuudai Aki, 24 January 2016 - 01:57 PM.

#2 Yuudai Aki

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 07:51 PM



  • Wakizashi [1]
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  • Shuriken [12]
  • Explosive Tag [5]
  • Wire [30 Ft.]

Edited by Yuudai Aki, 24 January 2016 - 10:44 AM.

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 08:05 PM

Jutsu and Abilities







Edited by Yuudai Aki, 24 January 2016 - 08:56 PM.

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 01:36 PM

With a C Rank in Ninjutsu you can have a second element if you want, or you can wait till later. You can remove the Alias, Clan, Organisation and Previous RPC Profile sections since they're empty.

Other than that everything seems good.


24hrs for further critique

Edited by RyouKachi, 24 January 2016 - 01:37 PM.

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 01:45 PM

I forgot about that, I have added a second Element Affinity, and removed the unfilled sections. Can I change one of my Ninjutsu though? I would like to add one Fuuton Ninjutsu to the list instead of having all three Suiton. That is of course if it is possible now, if not, I can always learn things later! I have also adjusted my Background to fit in the other Element.


Thank you very much.


PS. This is a question, but technically with a C Rank in Ninjutsu, I can learn C Rank Ninjutsu, no? Can I also start with one? Or is that a no!?

Edited by Yuudai Aki, 24 January 2016 - 01:52 PM.

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 08:35 PM

Since this is a new character, you can change your 3 free D rank jutsu for each style to whatever you like. Unfortunately, you do not have the training required for having other jutsu and will just have to RP it out like the rest of us! :)

This does mean that you can learn C rank ninjutsu. You just have to train for it.

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 08:57 PM

Thank you very much, I have edited everything and I think I am ready to go whenever you say I can. ^_^

Edited by Yuudai Aki, 24 January 2016 - 08:58 PM.

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Posted 25 January 2016 - 08:51 PM


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