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[Shinobi] Kisho, Tenken [Genin Medical Intern]


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#1 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 22 August 2015 - 03:44 PM

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Personal
 
Name:
 
Kisho, Tenken
 
Age:
 
16

Gender:
 
Male

Height:
 
5'4"

Weight:
 
105 lbs
 

Element:

 

Hyouton

Katon

Raiton

 

Language:

Common

Avian
Sati

Nagarian

Rikuhuu

Hyouganan

Konoi
 
Appearance:
 
His body is average build but lean. He keeps medium length black hair in a messy but cute look and he has clear, clean fair skin. Tenken's eyes are a soft, calm sky blue color.

His clothing is nothing fancy. He wears a traditional kimono top that is light blue with darker blue trim. On the forearms are protective guards. Under the kimono he wears a soft comfortable button up long sleeve undershirt and dark blue pants that tie just below the knee. The kimono is tied with a simple dark blue silk belt. The shoes are typical black open toed tabi footwear while the lower legs are wrapped in black bandages. His headband is embroidered into a sash that is tied around his waist as well. Attached to the belt are two pouches that hold his various shinobi items and weapons. Attached to his right leg is a holster that houses his kunai with tags.
 
Social

Class:
 
Shinobi

Rank:
 
Genin, Medical Intern

Village:
 
Kawagakure

Clan
 
Kisho Clan
Ikemoto
 
Statistics
 

Level: 10 [0/100 exp]

 

Ninjutsu D - C - B
Genjutsu D - C
Taijutsu D
Seals D - C
Strength D
Speed D - C
Intelligence D - C - B - A - S
Endurance D
Stamina D - C

 
D Rank Missions: 7
C Rank Missions: 0
B Rank Missions: 0
A Rank Missions: 0
S Rank Missions: 0

D Rank Crimes: 0
C Rank Crimes: 0
B Rank Crimes: 0
A Rank Crimes: 0
S Rank Crimes: 0

History
 
Background:

Spoiler


Previous RPC Profile:
 
Ikemoto, Ren


Edited by RyouKachi, 06 October 2015 - 05:29 PM.



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#2 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 22 August 2015 - 03:45 PM

Inventory


 
- Kunais [20]
- Shurikens [10]
- Exploding tags [10]
- Smoke bombs [3]

- Food pills [10]
- Water pills [10]
 
Event Items
- Dezātogan [Desserts Pill]

- Fūin no Shirohigi [Scroll of White Secret Techniques] [1]


Edited by RyouKachi, 06 December 2015 - 03:25 PM.

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#3 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 22 August 2015 - 03:46 PM

Jutsu and Abilities


Bloodline:

N/A

NINJUTSU

D Rank [25/30]
  • Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
  • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
  • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
  • Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill]
  • Kakuremino no Jutsu [Self Hiding Technique]
  • Katon: Hi Sunappu no Jutsu [Fire Release: Fire Snap]
  • Katon: Hotsuba [Fire Release: Fire Spit]
  • Katon: Kemuri Shiryoku no Jutsu [Fire Release: Smoke Sight Technique]
  • Katon: Moesashi [Flame Release: Embers]
  • Katon: Osoi Hinawa [Fire Release: Slow Fuse]
  • Kesu [Extinguish]
  • Moufu [Blanket]
  • Hyouton: Zoukouji [Ice Release: Decoy Statue]
  • Suno- Fure-ku Sankaku [Snow Flake Sensation]
  • Hyouton: Hyoushou no Sousaku [Ice Release: Ice Floor Creation]
  • Chakra Sona [Chakra Sonar]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Nebaru [Medical Ninja Art: Adhesive]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Togenuki [Medical Ninja Art: Tweezers]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Reiki [Medical Ninja Art: Cold Air]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Jun-Doku Kaihei [Medical Ninja Art Semi-Poison Extraction]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Seiryou [Medical Ninja Art: Refreshing]
  • Iryo Ninpou: Tomeru [Medical Ninja Art: To Halt]
  • Operation Theater
  • Clear Lungs
  • Death Timer.
C Rank [17/20]
  • Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
  • Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
  • Jibaku Fuda: Kassei [Exploding Tag: Activate]
  • Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
  • Katon: Jiraigen [Fire Release: Minefield]
  • Katon: Housenka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Mythical Fire Flower Technique]
  • Hyouton: Hara no Zoukouji [Ice Release: Decoy Statue Field]
  • Hyouton: Otaki Arashi [Ice Release: Cascading Storm Technique]
  • Hyouton: Yuki no Utsukushisa
  • Hyouton: Yuki-onna
  • Chakra Tensou [Chakra Transfer]
  • Fuzen Dokunuki no Jutsu [Imperfect Poison Extraction Technique]
  • Patient Monitor Seal
  • Gyouketsu [Blood Clot]
  • Rapid Stitching Technique
  • Iryo Ninpou: Zousaku Eizou [Medical Ninja Art: Facial Construction]
  • Charged Seals
B Rank [4/10]
  • Hard Light Shield I
  • Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba [Lightning Release: Thunder Fang]
  • Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]
  • Senjou Nui no Jutsu [Field Stitching Technique]
GENJUTSU

D Rank [15/20]
  • Ikimono Benkou [Avians]
  • Kaiteki Uta [Comfort Song]
  • Heki Hando Aizu no Jutsu [False Handseal Technique]
  • Kogiiku [Cheap Trick]
  • Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique]
  • Magen: Chirudo Tamashii [Demonic Illusion: Chilled Soul]
  • Magen: Onsui Tamashii [Demonic Illusion: Heated Soul]
  • Paranoia Wan Shotto [Paranoia One Shot]
  • Toriburu Bijon [Triple vision]
  • Ude Bunshin no Jutsu [Arm Clones Technique]
  • Look at me!
  • Hitotsuoki Sentaku [Alternate Choice]
  • Pull
  • Push
  • Thriller
C Rank [10/10]
  • Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release]
  • Hit Me Baby, One More Time
  • Futa Gansaku (Fake Cover)
  • Battle Meditation
  • Senken no Mei [Foresight]
  • Honoo Maborushi no Jutsu [Vision of Flames Technique]
  • Torappu Hensou no Jutsu [Trap Disguise Technique]
  • Nemuri [Sleep]
  • Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Technique]
  • Gyaku Bijon [Inverted Vision]
TAIJUTSU

D Rank [10/10]
  • Enhanced Smell I
  • Conquer the Senses: Smell I
  • Enhanced Sight I
  • Conquer the Senses: Sight I
  • Enhanced Hearing I
  • Conquer the Senses: Hearing I
  • Janpu [Jump]
  • Battou [Drawing Sword]
  • Battou Senkou [Drawing Sword Flash]
  • Ha [Edge of a Sword]

Edited by Blazestorm, 06 November 2015 - 05:35 AM.

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#4 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 22 August 2015 - 03:46 PM

Waiting to hear back from TR and Afroninja on the clans.


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Posted 25 August 2015 - 12:33 AM

Ok for Ikemoto


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#6 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 25 August 2015 - 12:51 AM

Thanks. I'm glad you're remaking them! I also spoke with Twilight on Skype and he said Kimera was a go to. However he is having trouble getting back on his account and getting a password reset when we last spoke so it mght be a while until he can get back on site.


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#7 Raun

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Posted 25 August 2015 - 02:56 AM

If you want this approved soon, you can remove Kimera for now and then add it later once Twilight gives the official nod.

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#8 ZacDesu

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Posted 25 August 2015 - 05:58 PM

So the thing that stands out most at the moment is the language area. You can add a maximum of three human languages and one animal language (which you already filled with canine).

 

If you don't have a bloodline, you can take that little bit out of the jutsu section.

 

Other than that, it's pretty simple to poke a person in skype and just have them post here :P


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Posted 27 August 2015 - 02:33 PM

When I spoke with TR he couldn't get logged in and was having issues getting the PW reset just like I was with my other account on this site. In the meantime can this get moved to WIP while I wait for the bloodline to get remade and the clan since my looks depend on the kimera part of the clan.


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Posted 27 August 2015 - 10:15 PM

This is TR... I'm trying to get my account working again -stab- But yeah he's golden on my book.



#11 jameshawking

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Posted 06 September 2015 - 12:36 AM

Kisho okay


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Posted 07 September 2015 - 08:05 AM

1. You'll require 50 exp to get to level 6 from level 5. So, it should be "Level: 5 [0/50 Exp]".
2. With C rank in Genjutsu, you get 20 D ranks and 10 C ranks. Currently, you have 29 D ranks. Please decrease the number of jutsus.
3. Katana is a C-ranked item. You can acquire it only after you reach level 6.
4. Both Tenken and Ren are used in the appearance and background. Please make the name consistent. Also, the thread title must have the full name of the RPC.
5. In the background, it is not clear how someone born in Konoki is now part of Kawagakure. The RPC doesn't seem to know Rikuhuu, which is the official language of Kawa. These are not necessary. You can keep things as it is if you like it that way. It would just be nice if you cleared up these things in the history section.

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#13 ChocoboCharm

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Posted 07 September 2015 - 12:51 PM

Bah this is what happens when you edit a finished characters stats, gear and change the name from one concept to another haha. I'll edit this and post again when done.

 

Edit: Done


Edited by ChocoboCharm, 07 September 2015 - 01:34 PM.

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Posted 08 September 2015 - 01:13 AM

This will take effect and the profile shall be moved once the two global Hyouton jutsus have been approved.
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