Jump to content


Photo

[Shinobi] Robin Stone [Academy Student]


  • This topic is locked This topic is locked
11 replies to this topic

#1 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 18 July 2015 - 07:22 AM

Ninja Info Card
tumblr_nlqqkegozt1r60zuio2_500.gif


 

Personal
 
Name: Robin Depp Stone
 
Alias: Johnny Williams

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Height: 4' 9"

Weight: 95lbs
 
Element: Water
 
Language: Sati, Common
 
Appearance:

 

What a person would first notice when they first lay their eyes on the young teen is the long pale line running down an inch to the left of the center of his neck. Although they can only see that solitary scar, what lay below that was a myriad of other marks that covered his entire body except his lower arm and legs. Messy yellow hair flows from the top of his head to his shoulders. His signature article of clothing is the pale green strip of cloth wrapped around his forehead and his neck. Aqua blue eyes remind Robin of his birth origin in the Water Country. As a person, the boy is of average height and weight for his age and has not developed a lot of muscle yet. Because of that, he is rather scrawny and weak but manages to cover that with the excess of clothing he wears.
 
 
Social

Class: Shinobi

Rank: Academy Student

Village: Yugegakure

Clan: None
 
Organization: None


Statistics
 
Level: Level 1 [0/25EXP]

Ninjutsu D
Genjutsu D
Taijutsu D
Seals D
Strength D
Speed
Intelligence D C
Endurance D
Stamina D
 
D Rank Missions: 0
C Rank Missions: 0
B Rank Missions: 0
A Rank Missions: 0
S Rank Missions: 0

D Rank Crimes: 0
C Rank Crimes: 0
B Rank Crimes: 0
A Rank Crimes: 0
S Rank Crimes: 0
 

History
 
Background:

 

This young boy's name was decided before he was born. His parents were avid play-goers and first met in the theater at the capital. They decided that his first name would be Robin, after the famous actor from the play Aladdin. His middle name, Depp, was from another actor who was famous for the play Pirates which first aired in the Water Country. Early on in his life, he showed impressive intelligence: able to talk and walk before the first year, learned to read and write around the age of three, memorized and can recite any stories he read and heard, and other things.

 

During the age of seven, the entire family went out to watch a play. Robin went out to the bathroom alone. His parents did not mind because he was capable of doing it by himself and they were in the middle of the play. It was then that the boy was kidnapped and taken away about five miles north of the theater. A note was left in the bathroom stall saying that if there wasn't 10,000 ryo at the specified location within a half day, the boy would be killed. Robin was brought over to a drunk group of bandits who did not care at all whether they got the money or not. All they wanted to do was torture the boy. He did what any boy would do the first time they are cut open: cry. They threatened him more until he finally fell silent while they made bruises and more cuts on his body. When they were finally satisfied with what they have done, they drove and tossed him underneath a bridge to die alone. Lying there bleeding and practically lifeless, Robin was waiting for death to come and bring him home, but it never came. Instead, he was found by a fisherman who quickly took him to a nearby hospital where he was later reunited with his parents. The boy told the police where the bandits were located thanks to his memory and were charged with heavy crimes and sentenced to life. Sadly, that particular memory has stayed with him his entire life even until now.

 

At the age of 13, when he was back in control of his life, Robin decided to be helpful to his parents and village by becoming a ninja. He enrolled and traveled out of the country for the first time to go to the mainland to the Stone Country where TSU was located and began his new life.


Edited by Enkou, 21 July 2015 - 12:54 AM.



“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#2 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 18 July 2015 - 07:23 AM

Inventory


 
Remember to include quantities in tags. (Kunai [5])  
Pet, Insect, Puppet, Poison and any other custom application listed will need to have a functioning link.
 
- Kunai [3]
- Senbon [5]
- Tanto [1]
- Hand Crossbow [1]
- Bolts [10]
-
- Umbrella [1]
- Bird Call [1]
- Flashlight [1]
- Matches [10]


“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#3 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 18 July 2015 - 07:23 AM

Jutsu and Abilities


 
 
 
NINJUTSU
 
Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu)
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The user is able to see light without it being bent by water. This allows them to see through a mist, or to the bottom of a pond.
Suijuu Kokyuu no Jutsu [Underwater Breathing Technique]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: A fairly simple water manipulation jutsu, this technique provides the ability to breathe underwater for a maximum of fifteen minutes or 3 posts, whichever comes sooner. This ability doesn't require the use of handseals.
-
 
GENJUTSU
 
Push
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The target will feel as if their body is being repelled from user's area.
Duration: 1 post
Kiga [Hunger]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The opponent is overcome by a sudden hunger and will be unable to concentrate fully because of this urge to find food; those who are weak against Genjutsu may even find themselves in a condition where they feel like they are lethargic due to this.
Post Count: 2 posts.
Nodono Kawaki [Thirst]
Rank: D
Requirements: None.
Description: The opponent is overcome by a sudden thirst and will be unable to concentrate fully because of this urge to find liquid.
Post Count: 2 posts.
 
TAIJUTSU
 
Battou [Drawing Sword]
Rank: D
Requirements: Sheathed sword.
Description: This is simply drawing a bladed weapon out of it's sheath. But it's done at a speed where the hand seems like an afterimage. It a technique derived from first strike sword styles.
Battou Senkou [Drawing Sword Flash]
Rank: D
Requirements: Battou [Drawing Sword]
Description: After the use of Battou or another Jutsu that requires Battou, the user of this technique quickly re-sheaths the blade into it's sheath with speed equal to that of the speed in which he had used to attack, the sword appearing as nothing more then a flash before returning to the users sheath.
Youjitsuba [Spitting Toothpick]
Rank: D
Requirement: A toothpick .
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the ninja spits a toothpick out of their mouth. Attacking in this manner, while the enemy is normally focusing on your hands, provides a small element of surprise, but with much more effectiveness when used following a distraction.
 


“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#4 Blazestorm

Blazestorm

    Returned from the Ashes

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 833 posts

Posted 19 July 2015 - 07:03 PM

I don't think this is ready, but here's some preliminary crits. Please post when you are finished.

1) If you don't have an alias, please remove that section.
2) If you aren't from one of the three villages, your classification should be bandless.
3) Not sure Seichi has movie theaters, but they could definitely have plays.

Posted Image
[thread="18084"]Blaze's Stuff[/thread]
Quote Box
Taiyoukage


#5 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 19 July 2015 - 07:43 PM

And done.


“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#6 Blazestorm

Blazestorm

    Returned from the Ashes

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 833 posts

Posted 19 July 2015 - 08:06 PM

Class: Shinobi

Rank: D

Village: Asawara (Water Country Capital)


Sorry, but Asawara is not a shinobi village. Yugegakure, which is in the Water Country, is however. If you would like to remain a shinobi, you may state you are a shinobi from Yugegakure that is stationed in Asawara. Otherwise, please change to bandless and remove the rank section.

Empty space in inventory if you would like to reorder or remove

You may get rid of the bloodline section in jutsu as well as the paragraph at the bottom.

Finally, are you aware of this promotion?

New Player Promotion
For those users who are not returning with a previous character and are brand new to these parts, they may create one Level 5 Genin/C rank MN/Bandless instead of the usual. Users are only normally only allowed to create Academy Students until they obtain Genin rank for at least one of them, this Genin will not count towards that.


Posted Image
[thread="18084"]Blaze's Stuff[/thread]
Quote Box
Taiyoukage


#7 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 19 July 2015 - 08:34 PM

Yeah, that's what I meant, thanks.

 

I'l leave the space for now.

 

I know it, I just feel like bringing back characters from the past that I haven't played in a while feels kind of bleh, so I'm starting fresh 'again'.


“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#8 Aka2.0

Aka2.0

    Chuunin

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • 363 posts
  • LocationToronto, Ontario

Posted 19 July 2015 - 09:07 PM

I don't really have any complaints, you can take another Ninjutsu if you wanted, I'd suggest Kawarimi haha, other than that this seems good to go. once the 24 hour limit is up you'll be good to go. 


The Ghost of the Uehara

Shin


#9 Blazestorm

Blazestorm

    Returned from the Ashes

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 833 posts

Posted 19 July 2015 - 09:37 PM

Half + Half = Full Stamp

Posted Image
[thread="18084"]Blaze's Stuff[/thread]
Quote Box
Taiyoukage


#10 ZacDesu

ZacDesu

    Young Fossil

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 231 posts
  • LocationInside Oir

Posted 20 July 2015 - 07:29 AM

I call your Full Stamp, and Raise it another Full Stamp. Ohwaitnvmcarryon


“...Whatever.”

Posted Image


#11 Raun

Raun

    Genin

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPip
  • 183 posts
  • LocationSeichi

Posted 20 July 2015 - 07:32 AM

Just one small thing. Your Rank should be Academy Student, not D.



Posted Image


Posted Image


Posted Image


Ryuzaki Yamamoto
Bandless | Lvl. 19


Misa Yamaguchi [WIP]
Yama Genin | Lvl. 5


Hatsuharu Akimoto
Yuge AS | Lvl. 1


#12 RyouKachi

RyouKachi

    Jounin

  • Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 861 posts

Posted 20 July 2015 - 03:50 PM

You can also remove the Organisation and Clan sections and the guidelines from your inventory






0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users