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#1 Shiyana

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 03:23 AM

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Personal

 

Name: Kojima, Tei 小島汀(なぎさ)

 

Alias: The Phantom, Noname

 

Age: 13

 

Gender: Male

 

Height: 5’1 (156cm)

 

Weight: 100 lb (45 kg)

 

Element: Hyouton, Suiton, Raiton, Mokuton

 

Language: Common, Hyougaan, Nagarean, Sati, Konoki, Rikuhi

 

Appearance: Tei is of average height and average build. His recent training and devotion to the art of becoming a shinobi has led him to endure difficult and hard training to hone his body more into a weapon. While he doesn’t have anything of spectacular note to his physical attributes, he works hard and will attempt to overcome all obstacles to get to the next level.

 

His hair is short-medium in length with a few spikes at the front and center of his head. He has black-brown hair and brown eyes, nothing to note as special or amazing (unless you count normalcy in a place full of bright-colored hair special). He has an athletic build due to hard work and training.

 

Social

 

Class: Shinobi

 

Rank: Genin

 

Village: Yamagakure

 

Statistics

 

Level: Level 20 [0/400]

 

Ninjutsu D C B A S

Genjutsu D C B A

Taijutsu D C

Seals D C B A

Strength D C

Speed D C B A

Intelligence D C B A S

Endurance D

Stamina D C

 

D Rank Missions: 20

C Rank Missions: 15

B Rank Missions: 10

A Rank Missions: 4

S Rank Missions: 2

 

D Rank Crimes: 0

C Rank Crimes: 0

B Rank Crimes: 0

A Rank Crimes: 0

S Rank Crimes: 0

 

 

History

 

Background: Tei was always dedicated to whatever he put his heart to. He was never gifted in a single area, except at being hard working and making it look like he was gifted at everything because of his tenacity and study habits. Born into a normal home and non-shinobi parents, he was expected to go to a civilian university to pursue a normal and commendable job. He was on track to graduating with high honors. People often came to him for help. Except for one girl, his neighbor, who kept bullying him and pestering him. She even gave him the name Noname! Well regardless, he started calling her Jalapeno. Life was normal as one could imagine it to be for Tei, however it was at the age of 13 that his life had changed. It was apparent that Tei was destined for greatness, well, at least destined to become a shinobi. At first, awed by the bravery and the courage of the many nameless soldiers he saw doing tasks that only few would dare undertake, he had begun to study what shinobi did and how to become. This was when he had decided to change his path. He would no longer become an engineer or get a normal and commendable job that his parent’s wanted him to get. He wanted to pursue the path of being a shinobi.

 

Now, no parent wants their child to be a soldier, and Tei’s parents were no different. They did all they could to stop him from changing his career path. His good grades in school was sure to give great success for him. While his mother feared the worst for Tei, his father decided to allow him to pursue his new dream. This had been the first time Tei had wanted to do something for himself. His father, taking the reins of the relationship, decided to make the decision of letting his son pursue becoming a shinobi.

 

Tei’s grades allowed him to earn high marks in his application to his new career path. Certain that he was destined for greatness, the now young shinobi would prove to his parents and to the world that there was more than success in materialism in the world, rather there was a much greater satisfaction in helping those in need.

 

Now, it was time for Tei to set on his journey towards becoming the best. He would work hard to become world-renown.

 

After becoming a Ninja, his growth was exponential. He was able to tag along on many missions as a student, taking in experience as well as seeing how people work in the battlefield. The experience was invaluable to him, and he continued to work on honing his strategy and skills. The shinobi worked day and night to perfect his strategy, and he continued to work hard. Many would have what people would call "natural talent", but Tei was different. While he had a few aspects that could be considered his natural talent, his note taking and devotion set  him apart from everyone. All of those missions, he had gained a lot of effort and possibly some fame, but he decided not to let his past put him in a place where he didn't want to be, instead he wanted to work with a team, and learn how to work with others.

 

Sample Post: “Tei!!!!” said a woman in a motherly tone. It was clear that she was concerned, unhappy, and worried for her child. His eyes perked up from his book. He had started writing notebooks on becoming a Shinobi and important key points. He was simply reviewing it before the wagon to take him to the center of Yamagakure arrived. He had also stopped packing. He had some fresh ideas that he had to confirm with his old notes. He began writing them as fast as he could, not noticing his mother calling for him. “Tei! ANSWER WHEN I CALL FOR YOU!” a yell came from downstairs. Tei looked up, finally hearing the faint noise that was masked by his thought process. Shaking his head to mentally move away the wall he had built up to the outside world, he looked towards his door and finally asked: “Yeah mom?” He knew this would be her last attempt to keep him from leaving, so he steeled his resolved a bit more, looking at the headband he had already been given.

 

Tei got up and packed the rest of his clothes and placed the notebook, one of five, into his bag. All five were in his backpack. He stuffed the headband carefully into the front pocket of his backpack and went downstairs to answer his summon. He drudgingly went down, trying to make every step as pronounced as possible, showing his apparent dislike of having to go through this process again. He had already made it to the last step when his mother had slapped him right across the head. His right hand reached towards his forehead and he rubbed it gently, trying to soothe the searing pain that had just taken place. “DO YOU KNOW HOW WORRIED I’LL BE? I’ll never know if you’ll.. ever come back home!” she cried. Tears began streaming down her eyes, but Tei had already made a choice. He wouldn’t back down, regardless. Besides, it was his full intention to never live in this house again. He simply placed his palm on the small of the back of his mother’s and let her cry. He wouldn’t try to stop her, because she was right, it may be the last time she would see him. He wasn’t planning to return, but he did tell them that he would remember them and that he would visit.

 

Previous RPC Profile: Replacing Ryuken with level only. I’ll be starting as Genin


Edited by Shiyana, 19 July 2015 - 12:46 AM.




#2 Shiyana

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 03:23 AM

Inventory

 

- Tanto [1]

- Bow [1]

- Kunai [5]

- Shuriken [10]

- Flash Bombs [5]

- Boom Bombs [5]

- Smoke Bombs [5]

- Explosive Tags [10]

- Wire [1000 m]

- Lockpicking Set

- Arrows [20]

- Cowl

- Reinforced Leather Gloves

- Trousers

- Boots


Edited by Shiyana, 19 July 2015 - 03:55 AM.


#3 Shiyana

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 03:23 AM

Jutsu and Abilities

 

 

 

NINJUTSU [70/150]

 

  • Souharigane no Jutsu [Wire Manipulation Technique] {D}
  • Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] {D}
  • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] {D}
  • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique] {D}
  • Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Untying Skill] {D}
  • Harigane Gappei [Meld Wire/Wire Fusion] {D}
  • Suiton: Shiryoku [Water Release: Sight] (Doujutsu) {D}
  • Koe no Mozouhin [Voice Imitation] {D}
  • Fuuin no Tsukurite [Seal Creator] {D}
  • Utsusemi no Jutsu [Projection Technique] {D}
  • Hyouton: Daeki Senbon [Ice Release: Saliva Senbon] {D}
  • Hyouton: Hyoushou no Sousaku [Ice Release: Ice Floor Creation] {D}
  • Hyouton: Zoukouji [Ice Release: Decoy Statue] {D}
  • Raiton: Sanda- Hakushu [Lighting Release: Thunder Clap] {D}
  • Kinobori [Tree Climbing] {C}
  • Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking] {C}
  • Hyouton: Hara no Zoukouji [Ice Release: Decoy Statue Field] {C}
  • Hyouton: Kouri Senbon [Ice Release: Ice Needles] {C}
  • Hyouton: Ishinomo no Koori [Ice Release: Ice Shot] {C}
  • Jibaku Fuda: Kassei [Exploding Tag: Activate] {C}
  • Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique] {C}
  • Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique] {C}
  • Suiton: Mizurappa [Water Release: Violent Water Wave] {C}
  • Suiton: Teppoudama [Water Release: Bullet] {C}
  • Suiton: Suisou [Water Release: Water Camouflage] {C}
  • Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu [Water Clone Technique] {C}
  • Raiton: Furiokosukeidenki [Lightning Release: Electrical Enhancer] {C}
  • Raiton: Raikyu [Lightning Release: Lightning Ball] {C}
  • Shishinkei Shibugoretsu [Optic Nerve Disruption] {C}
  • Anshi [Night Vision] {C}
  • Ketsugou, Bunkatsu [Union, Division] {C}
  • Kyougiri [Vibrating Cutter] {C}
  • Fuuinjutsu: Chouin [Sealing] {C}
  • Chakra Sensory I {C}
  • Suishuu Gorugon [Water Attack Strong Current Torrential Rain] {B}
  • Suiton: Sousui no Jutsu [Water Release: Water Manipulation Technique] {B}
  • Suiton: Suirou no Jutsu [Water Release: Water Prison Technique] {B}
  • Suiton: Ame Yose no Jutsu [Water Release: Rain Summoning technique] {B}
  • Suiton: Mizu Kabe [Water Release: Water Wall] {B}
  • Suiton: Mizu no Naihatsu [Water Release: Water Blast] {B}
  • Suiton: Uzumaki Kadou no Jutsu [Water Release: Whirlpool Vortex Technique] {B}
  • Hyouton: Ryuusou [Ice Release: Dragon Frost] {B}
  • Hyourou no Jutsu [Ice Prison Technique] {B}
  • Hyouton: Hyouheki [Ice Release: Ice Wall] {B}
  • Hyouton: Tsubame Fubuki [Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm] {B}
  • Yoroi no Koori [Ice Armor] {B}
  • Raiton: Myaku Kyuutai [Lightning Release : Pulse Orb] {B}
  • Raivu Waiya- [Live Wire] {B}
  • Zenshinfuzui [Total Paralysis] {B}
  • Netsushi [Thermal Vision] (Doujutsu) {B}
  • Gikyoshin [Chivalrous Spirit] {B}
  • Chakra Sensory II {B}
  • Hyouton: Hyougen [Ice Release: Ice Field] {A}
  • Hyouton: Haryu Muuko [Ice Release: Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger]
  • Hyouton: Rikurin [Ice Realse: Cold Land] {A}
  • Touketsu Yaiba no Arashi [Frozen Blade Storm] {A}
  • Suiton: Joushou Kanketsusen [Water Release: Rising Geyser] {A}
  • Suiton: Suijin Heki [Water Release: Water Barricade] {A}
  • Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu [Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique] {A}
  • Hateshiganairyuu [Eternal Dragon] {A}
  • Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu [Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique] {A}
  • Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki [Lightning Release: Lightning Dragon Tornado] {A}
  • Raivu Waiya-: Senkou [Live Wire: Flash] {A}
  • Chakra Shikai [Chakra Field of Vision] {A}
  • Chakra Sensory III {A}
  • Kuchiyose: Rashomon [Summoning: Rashomon] {S}
  • Hyouton: Moufubuki - Hyouga no Buriza-do [Ice Release: Furious Snowstorm - Hyouga's Blizzard] {S}
  • Hyouton: Koori-Mizu Tsuin Atama no Haidora [Ice Release: Ice-Water Twin Headed Hydra] {S}
  • Hyouton: Idaina Keibitai - Gurando Keimusho [Ice Release: Mighty Guard - Grand prison] {S}
  • Suiton: Oogata Suirou no Jutsu [Water Release: Big Water Prison Technique] {S}

 

GENJUTSU [18/100]

 

  • Heki Hando Aizu no Jutsu [False Handseal Technique] {D}
  • Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique] {D}
  • Itami Nai [No Pain] {C}
  • Koori no Jutsu [Ice Technique] {C}
  • Nemuri [Sleep] {C}
  • Magen: Kokuni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: False Surrounding Technique] {C}
  • Magen: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Sly Fellow Mind Technique] {C}
  • Magen: Moufubuki [Demonic Illusion: Blizzard] {C}
  • Mizu Kouzui no Jutsu [Water Flood Technique] {C}
  • Soriddo Kasumi Buki [Solid Mist Weapon] {C}
  • Genjutsu Kai [Genjutsu Release] {C}
  • Koori Senbon [Ice Needles] {B}
  • Chien Shikaku [Delayed Sight] {B}
  • Nemurihane [Feather Sleep] {B}
  • Magen: Niju Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Double False Surrounding Technique] {B}
  • Koori Torappu no Jutsu [Ice Trap Technique] {A}
  • Suiyou no Aichou [Mournful Melody of Weeping Willows] {A}
  • Shukketsu Tsukimono [Bleeding curse] {A}

 

TAIJUTSU [15/30]

 

  • Ametsuchi Rendan [Heaven and Earth Combo] {D}
  • Chou Oe no Ha [Butterfly on the Leaves] {D}
  • Gyaku Girochin [Inverse Guillotine] {D}
  • Taka Me no Kobushi [Hawk Eye Fist] {D}
  • Yaen Hanewaza [Monkey Flip] {D}
  • Asshou [Pressure Palm] {C}
  • Sucker Punch {C}
  • Bouseki Yajirushi [Spinning Arrow] {C}
  • Kage Buyou [Leaf Shadow Dance] {C}
  • Konoha Daisenpu [Leaf Great Whirlwind] {C}
  • Konoha Reppuu [Leaf Violent Wind] {C}
  • Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind] {C}
  • Konoha Shofu [Leaf Rising Wind] {C}
  • Nitsu no Sutoraiki [Two Strikes] {C}
  • Dangan Panchi [Bullet Punch] {C}

Edited by Shiyana, 19 July 2015 - 12:43 AM.


#4 Raun

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 04:19 AM

Hi~ Welcome back! Here are few things I noticed in a quick glance.

  • With C Rank in Strength, you have 20 inventory slots. Starting with 10 at D Rank, your inventory space increases by 10 every letter rank in Strength.
  • Basic Jutsus take up Jutsu slots. This way, we have only three kinds: Nin, Gen, and Tai.
  • According to your ranks in Nin, Gen, and Tai, the number of Jutsu slots you have are:
    • Ninjutsu (100): 40 D Ranks, 30 C Ranks, 20 B Ranks, and 10 A Ranks 
    • Genjutsu (100): 40 D Ranks, 30 C Ranks, 20 B Ranks, and 10 A Ranks 
    • Taijutsu (30): 20 D Ranks and 10 C Ranks 
  • So, you unfortunately can't have the followings S Rank Jutsus yet.
    • Hyouton: Koori-Mizu Tsuin Atama no Haidora [Ice Release: Ice-Water Twin Headed Hydra] {S}
    • Hyouton: Idaina Keibitai - Gurando Keimusho [Ice Release: Mighty Guard - Grand prison] {S}
    • Suiton: Oogata Suirou no Jutsu [Water Release: Big Water Prison Technique] {S}
  • Nitpick warning! The level need not be included in the thread title. It is sufficient to insert only the character's rank.


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#5 Shiyana

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 05:24 AM

1) I thought each line is a unique 1 item, and the quantity doesn't matter?

 

2) I changed them and added them to where they needed to be

 

3) I changed my Ninjutsu to S-rank and removed my C-rank from Endurance.

 

4) If I have S-rank in Ninjutsu, this shouldn't be a problem right?

 

5) I will change it.


Edited by Shiyana, 18 July 2015 - 05:26 AM.


#6 Raun

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 05:34 AM

1. There was nothing wrong in what you had. I was simply informing you that you have access to 10 more slots.

4. Yes. Now you can have S Rank Ninjutsu. Note that with S Rank in Ninjutsu, your Ninjutsu slots increase to 150. [50 D, 40 C, 30 B, 20 A, 10 S]

 

Rest seems good to me. I'll wait the 24 hours to give you my half stamp. :)



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#7 Aka2.0

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 06:20 PM

Slots & Inventory are A-OK, your appearance could use a little something for his looks, but not completely necessary, your description gives me an okay image of him in my head, however a bit more history should be tossed in there, for the simple fact he has so many missions under his belt.

 

Also the two lines above your inventory can be removed, unless you are keeping them there to remind you of what you can/can't do. 

 

1/2 Stamp is yours once the 24 hour mark has been reached on your application. 


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#8 Enkou

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Posted 18 July 2015 - 09:54 PM

Looks good, but as Aka said, this could use more description.

ALSO! Your number count in your jutsu list categories is a bit off. You might wanna tweak it before this is locked up. :3

 

*Throws stamp into the pile*



#9 Shiyana

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Posted 19 July 2015 - 12:46 AM

I added to the history a bit... and added lots of Jutsu



#10 Raun

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Posted 19 July 2015 - 02:58 AM

You can remove the cloth armour. They don't take up an inventory slot anymore. Only armour that provide protection takes up a slot. A description of your clothing in the appearance section is sufficient.

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#11 Shiyana

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Posted 19 July 2015 - 03:56 AM

Done



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Posted 19 July 2015 - 04:13 AM

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Oops... Looks like I have only half the stamp. Find the other half!



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#13 RyouKachi

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Posted 19 July 2015 - 05:41 AM

Oh you mean this other half?

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