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[AS] Sanada, Ryu [Nagare]

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#1 silvertonguemt


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 07:26 AM

Name: Ryu Sanada

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Height: 63in (160cm)

Weight: 110lbs (50Kg)

Appearance: Ryu has dark blue eyes, and shaggy light brown hair. His hair is kept off his ears and out of his eyes by a pair of mirror lensed ski goggles. He has a pale complexion and a larger frame than the average kid his age. Ryu has aquiline features, which are coupled with an easy smile. His cheeks have a ruddy hue, whether it is from the Nagarian winds or heat tanned skin from his fireworks, no one is sure.

He wears a navy blue racer jacket with padding in the elbows and forearms. There is a large white dragon emblem on the back. Ryu wears the jacket open revealing a black t-shirt underneath. His pants are royal blue with a white dragon stretching down the leg. The knees in the pants are also padded. Behind is back are two ninja tool pouches along with a shuriken holster down is left leg.

Rank: Academy Student

Village: Nagare

Language: Nagarian (Fluent) + Common (Nagarian Accent)

Main/Favored Weapon: None

Side Arms:
oLeft Leg Pouch:
- 1x Kunai
- 4x Shuriken

oRight Rear Pouch:
- 10x Explosive tags
- 3x Smoke Bombs
- 3x Flash Bombs
- 25ft Wire spool

oLeft Rear Pouch:
- 4x Kunai
- 1x 1m scroll
- Ink pot and Brush

Element: Doton [Earth Release]

Fighting Type: N/A

Fighting Style: Grenadier
-Ryu prides himself on use of bombs and explosives. Through the use of both lethal and non lethal weapons, he engages the enemy.

- Explosives

- Intelligence
- Accuracy

- Partial deafness

- Doton: Da-to Tsumemono wo Keisi [Earth Release: Dirt Wad Formation]
- Doton: Jimen Bara [Earth Release: Ground Thorns]
- Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
- Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
- Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]

Background: Being the second born son in a family of five children, Ryu was constantly left to his own devices. In his opinion, he was overshadowed by his older brother and sisters. Ryu's older siblings engrossed themselves in their studies all choosing to follow their parents example to lead civilian lives. His mother and father own a fireworks factory, that has become respected and their work is constantly sought after. Forever in his siblings shadow, Ryu desired attention from his parents. Due to his natural affinity for his parents they let him help at the factory. From an early age, Ryu strove to make bigger and better combustive works of art. He began working with the elder workers, learning to combine elemental powder to create separate effects. His fascination with both the pyrotechnics and life as a shinobi have driven him toward TSU.

Sample Post:

Sssshhh! You if you are any louder the old man will catch us. He threatened to tan my backside if he caught me nicking these again!

The youth turns to the small gaggle of cohorts he has assembled. Alright, Kami, go in and flirt with my brother. He's working the counter and has always had a fling for you.

The girl rolls her eyes and lowers her head shaking it. Ugh, this had better be worth it. I am not going out with that dork. He's such a bookworm!

Ryu turns to the boy next to her. Ken, I'm going to boost you up and over the counter on the other end. If we time it right he won't notice you. Try to be quiet? As soon as you are over unlock the gate so I can come in and help. Once we have what we want we'll meet up back here. The sandy haired hooligan is the first to enter the family shop. Yo! What do you want? I thought you were supposed to be helpin' Ma at the house," his brother sneers at him. She sent me down to check on you! She was worried her precious boy might be hungry. He replies with his own jape.

As Ryu's brother prepares another come back, Kami makes her way into the store. She waves to Ryu's brother before turning to Ryu. You so owe me! She whispers walking by. Raising his eyebrow inquisitively, Ryu quickly shakes his head and points to his ear. She continues walking to the counter she playing dumb and asking simple questions about the pyrotechnics in the shop. Ryu's brother stumbles over his own words, scrambling to impress the girl....

Edited by silvertonguemt, 22 January 2014 - 12:29 AM.

#2 Kiamaru


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 01:44 PM

Welcome to TNF, always nice to see new faces ^_^

Given that this character is an explosive specialist I'm going to allow for the amount of explosives your character has. I will however say that if you're going to use the wire, make it 25 feet instead of 25 meters, it is far too much for an academy student.

If you could also expand on your background a little bit that would be good as well, though for an Academy Student I can let that slide.

If you have any other questions let me know ^_^

#3 silvertonguemt


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 07:16 PM

Alright I have given it a bit of an edit, hopefully we can get this stamped!!

#4 Hironidin


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Posted 21 January 2014 - 07:18 PM

Its nearly ready for stamping, just a few minor things to clear up first.

You might wanna describe your characters features a little more, like his face for example. You don't need to beef it up with trivial things, but a few more details would be appreciated.

Also, you've double posted your Background Title.

Speaking of which, is your background complete? It just kinda ends without any resolution...

#5 silvertonguemt


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Posted 22 January 2014 - 12:32 AM

My post has been updated a bit... I'd prefer to focus more on him writing his story as he grows versus a very normal childhood in a large family.

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Posted 22 January 2014 - 12:37 AM

Speaking of which, is your background complete? It just kinda ends without any resolution...

Sorry, I meant to say your sample post. Your background is fine as it is.

Regardless, I believe you are good to go, sir.

Here, have a Half Stamp from me to you.

#7 Kiamaru


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Posted 22 January 2014 - 12:41 AM

Have another Half Stamp.

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Posted 26 January 2014 - 09:25 PM



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