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kusai_bito
28-04-2007, 18:25
(since my last jutsu seemed over powered to everyone I'll try again. Please critique people!)

Name: Cape Manipulation jutsu.

Rank: C

Type: Ninjutsu

Range: Mid and long range

Element: Nonelemental

Village Origin: Sato

Description: This jutsu is a last resort jutsu, using about twenty- thirty percent of the users chakra pool. Once used, the users cape (theoretically any piece of clothing could be used) can be manipulated how they see fit. They can seperate the cape into stiff sharp edged pieces to attack from a distance with. Yet again, the user can expand the cape and then use it for this). Once the person has used the jutsu, they can only make it into three manipulations (aka expand it three times or use the shredded cloths to attack three times) If the user is hit while using this jutsu, they will lose their concentration and only get the uses they have already used and still lose all the chakra for the jutsu. Also, once the jutsu is in use, cape is constantly moving and floating without the use of extra chakra. The user can control the shards when not using it to attack, but they can't move if they do because it requires more concentration.

Individual ability description:
-shredding: The shards of the cape can be used to attack and to disrupt vision of something. They can be used to attack a total of three times (aka stiff cape shards going in the direction of the enemy three times) and if used to block the view of something, it wouldn't be one of the three times that this jutsu can be used. They can't be used to stab, just to go by something and cut it on the sides. The deepest they can cut is about 1 1/2 inches.


Pros:
-being able to create more projectiles

Cons:
-Is a last resort(as I said before it uses a lot of chakra)
-Can be interrupted
-Lacks good close range support(the clone being the only decent use of close range since every other use would have the cape far away from you)

Learning time: 10 days

Jutsu creator: Noroi, Kumicha

Aeterno
28-04-2007, 18:31
You'll have to extend your explanation for each individual manipulation, especially the shield / shuriken need an indication of it's power.

Depending on that, this jutsu may not get to be C ranked.

kusai_bito
28-04-2007, 19:18
Ok, I gave an individual description of each. If I need to add more description I just tell me.

Aeterno
28-04-2007, 19:23
You didn't exactly specify the power of these projectiles.

kusai_bito
28-04-2007, 19:33
Oh yeah... Sorry my mistake I'll blame it on my american stupidity. I fixed it and all...

Ino
04-05-2007, 00:57
(to about 70sq ft for a beginner. With enough experience they can expand the amount they can expand the cape to to 100sq ft)

faaarrrr to big for a C rank.

in fact, i see this being a B rank, possibly an A rank ._.

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 01:06
7x10 to 10x10 far to big? That's barely enough to decently secure someone that's 6ft. Not to mention it uses a large amount of chakra and since it's just cloth it'd be easy to avoid.

Ino
04-05-2007, 01:15
i was thinking meters instead of feet. sorry <.<

if you have already shredded it once, it can come back together o.o?
at least, thats the impression i got.


and, what can the clone part do? anything?

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 01:23
Yeah the shreds can come back together. I have an image in my head about how it looks but that'd be giving away my coolest use of it and I don't wanna do that! Though hmm... Think of it like if you've seen the lion the witch and the wardrobe (the recent version) then think the flowers would assemble to form a shape, but it was tiny pieces at first (the shards of the cape wouldn't be that small of course)

It's capable of doing absolutely no damage. It's just a clone of whatever I choose (It basically destroys any hope of figuring out how a cape can be compacted into say the shape of a kunai)

Ino
04-05-2007, 01:26
since this jutsu has so many uses, knock it down to three reforms.


er, wait. They can be used to attack a total of five times (aka stiff cape shards going in the direction of the enemy five times)

and uh, just how many shards can you make from the cape/clothing?

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 01:36
Ok I'm fine with that. And my cape... I'd say it's about... about 25sqft ish so I'd say... Meh about 25-30ish?

Ino
04-05-2007, 01:37
i edited my post, in case you missed it. (im guessing so since you didnt respond to that part) meh, ill repost it.

er, wait. Quote:
They can be used to attack a total of five times (aka stiff cape shards going in the direction of the enemy five times)
and uh, just how many shards can you make from the cape/clothing?

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 01:46
yeah I editted my post... sorry

my cape... I'd say it's about... about 25sqft ish so I'd say... Meh about 25-30ish?

Ino
04-05-2007, 01:54
25-30, even though they dont do damage alone, is alot ._.

that could literally cripple an oppenent if hit properly......
and its only a C rank .-.

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 01:59
Ok I can lower it down to like 20ish? Or is that still too high?

Ino
04-05-2007, 02:04
with the help of another mod, ive decided, either

A. bump this up to a B rank
-or-
B. keep any two of your forms minus shredding.
C. keep the shredding only.

kusai_bito
04-05-2007, 02:15
Ok I'm done editting it. So if theres anything else I need to change can someone tell me?

Anki
25-05-2007, 04:59
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