[Clothes] Clothes [Kisho Clan]

[jameshawking]

Weapon Name: Clothes

Weapon Type: ...Clothing

Weapon Class: Super-special-awesome

Dimensions: The appropriate, snug-fitting size of the person wearing it.

Weight: 23 pounds

Appearance: http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h139/jameshawking/BADASS.jpg

A form-fitting, snug, black-and-blue leather outfit, with an ornately designed, intricate embroidering along the chest.

Don't worry about the picture disappearing, it's saved to my hard drive.

Specialties: Several



Automatically fits to the user (D-Rank chakra)
Retractable blades sealed inside the forearms, tuned to the user, but otherwise unremarkable. Made out of steel, two feet long, bladed on both edges, three inches thick. (C-Rank to unseal+expand, D to seal)
Sealed balanced throwing knives, sealed into the outer biceps of each arm, 8 inches long, steel, one to each arm (D-Rank to unseal)
Chakra-sprung boot blades, 4 inches past the boot (D-Rank to push out)

Temperature resistant by 50 degrees Fahrenheit (+/-)

Resistant slicing/Slashing (C-Rank resistant), Chest is also resistant to stabbing (C-Rank resistant)
Filtered sight/Hearing, automatically reducing brightness to usual levels and reducing audio qualities to standard levels in case of sudden spike/drastic change (B-Rank drain for each)
"Firestarter" material, akin to Kaen Koromo no neno (http://www.theninja-forum.com/Vbulletin/showthread.php?t=23294). Flames may occur at the users behest ata location of their choosing

"Rebreather", 3C/post
Maintains henge for no concentration at triple cost

Replaces weapon in weapon-related ninjutsu (motions are maintained) (additional C-rank cost)
Can be sealed into the body (C-rank to unseal/wear)
Sound-reduced padding

Med-Nin Exclusive: Physical wounds (bruises/cuts/slashes/piercings) that occur in combat with this suit on heal, draining a cost of 2B/post, with each wound healing in one post. Only occurs if the shinobi is a standard mednin or higher. Only heals at the level of Healing Hands, with the same concentration.

Elemental Expression: The suit can, at the will of the user, gain basic elemental properties of one of the elements of the wearer. For example: katon will heat up the suit, raiton will create a charge in the suit, at a rate of Rank-1 (C-Rank cost for D-Rank effect, for example).



Slot Cost: [Optional for Weapons/Items with Special Abilities, Do Not Fill]

Owner: Kisho Seiko (only one exists)


I realize this is spiffy. Hence, I'm taking advice on slot cost.

[KooriJoufu]

Weapon Name: Clothes

Weapon Type: ...Cloth

Weapon Class: Super-special-awesome

Dimensions: The appropriate, snug-fitting size of the person wearing it.

Weight: 23 pounds

Appearance: A form-fitting, snug, black-and-blue leather outfit, with an ornately designed, intricate embroidering along the chest.

Owner: Kisho CLan (only one exists)


Bit of nitpicking but:

- Clothes is... I dunno just uninspired for a name

- You say it's cloth but then later call it blue black leather

- I'm really rather sure that's not a real weapon/item class

- I find the weight to be a little weird but I guess it doesn't matter much

Like I said nitpicking details, also you spelled Clan as CLan

[jameshawking]

lol, alright, and alright.

Also, I picked the weight and made it high to give it a physical reason to be so durable.

[Yuki Aisu]

So um, is the weapon class Item With S/A then?

And if you're gonna refrence another item, it's best to link to it, so I know what you're talking about, if that has a slot cost, is an item with S/A, ect.

I have a bunch of things I want to say to this, but I want to get the technicalities out of the way first, and maybe let Deep or Raph get their hands on this before I attempt to rip into it.

[kajowwojak]

Forgive me for intruding, however, but... Is that the Bad-A from Hellboy?

And is there anything that these "clothes" cant do?

[Yuki Aisu]

Make a smoothie, obviously.

Oh, btw. I'm inclined to say that the slot cost of this is gonna be C, I figure. Temperature resistance and the rebreathing abilities, while underpowered/altered as compared to their jutsu equivalents, have jutsu equivalents. Which are C+. So um... it seems this is a no go, cuz it's a clan item.

[jameshawking]

How about if it's a clan item, but there's only one of them o.o?

Like, it can only belong to one person at a time.

[Random]

Just noticed, for the sealed throwing knives, how many are in there?

[jameshawking]

one on each arm, located at the bicep, laterally.

[Yuki Aisu]

I'm still fairly certain that goes against the rule. I realize that is an attempt to get past the reason why the rule has been created, but that doesn't help a lot of people.

However, I'm not the item-buff on TNF, so if any mod wants to come in and okay it, I'd be okay with that.

[jameshawking]

alrighty, then.

I tweaked it a bit.

[Yuki Aisu]

So you... added on more abilities?

And you still need to note whether or not this is a weapon with S/A. I assume it is, all things considered, but you need to say that. Why? So you don't get to loophole your way through TNF such.

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

First off, your bbc code is a freaking mess. Your entire app is in size 2. meaning, you would need only 1 opening and closing bracket encompassing the entire statement. You have 18 of them. why? It makes it a mess to quote.

Second off, about the picture thing, so you mean if the picture dies on photobucket, you can re-upload the picture? In that case, are we just supposed to trust you that once this is accepted, you don't simply go and change the picture?

Retractable blades sealed inside the forearms, tuned to the user, but otherwise unremarkable. Made out of steel, two feet long, bladed on both edges, three inches thick. (C-Rank to unseal+expand)

How much to seal?

Sealed balanced throwing knives, sealed into the outer biceps of each arm, 8 inches long, steel (D-Rank to unseal)

Number?

Resistant slicing/Slashing (C-Rank), Chest is resistant to stabbing (C-Rank)

By this do you mean every time you are attacked, you lose a C-rank amount of chakra? Or that up to C-rank slashing/stabbing attacks just bounce off?

Filtered sight/Hearing, automatically reducing brightness to usual levels and reducing audio qualities to standard levels in case of sudden spike/drastic change (B-Rank for each)

Again, is the B-rank how much chakra is automatically used, or the upper level of offensive techs this counters?

"Firestarter" material, akin to Kaen no Koromo. Flames may occur at the users behest ata location of their choosing


link required.

Can make cookies

Where, how, when, why? How long does this take? What kind of cookies? Where can you produce the cookies? Maximum range? Can you make a cookie in someone's rectum?

Elemental Expression: The suit can, at the will of the user, gain basic elemental properties of one/more of the elements of the wearer. For example: katon will heat up the suit, raiton will create a charge in the suit, at a rate of Rank-1 (C-Rank cost for D-Rank effect, for example).

Upper limit on this?

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Slot cost evaluation:
Auto-med-tech thing: A-rank (You are getting B-rank med-jutsu automatically after all)

Elemental Expression: Rank+1 of whatever level effect you can produce at most. Whether letting you getting away with such a low slot cost is okay is questionable actually.

Rebreather: C-rank probably.

Fire Starter: Need link to what you are basing it on.

Auto-anti-sound/light: B-rank or C-rank. Leaning towards B-rank.

How about if it's a clan item, but there's only one of them o.o?

Like, it can only belong to one person at a time.

That is not a clan item than.

[jameshawking]

edited it all in, Neko.

And I want it to be a clan item, that way if I'm inactive or busy another Kisho can use it if I'm not.

[Raphael]

So, are each of these effects always in place, but with chakra drain? The way its worded, these things do not need activation but would constantly drain. And given their chakra costs, anyone less than jounin in rank would be severely drained after two posts.

Also, given your number, quality and variety of effects, I'm inclined to say this thing would use probably an upper ranked jutsu slot. At least an A. Though the med nin specialty could push it up to S.

As you know, the jutsu slot allows/disallows it being a clan item. In its current form, it is too powerful to be a clan item.

[jameshawking]

Please do realize that 5 of them are sealing/unsealing related.

And the effects activate when they're relevant, such as the henge change, or the healing one. Can't heal a wound you don't have, after all.

[Evelis]

erm... this kind off reads like a very powerfull legendary weapon....

But cool to read

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

Your BBC code is still a mess.

You haven't addressed my point with the picture.

Still missing how many throwing knives you have sealed.

Med-Nin Exclusive: Physical wounds (bruises/cuts/slashes/piercings) that occur in combat with this suit on heal, draining a cost of 2B/post, with each wound healing in one post. Only occurs if the shinobi is a standard mednin or higher.

Does this heal all wounds in a single post, or one wound per post?

Also, given your number, quality and variety of effects, I'm inclined to say this thing would use probably an upper ranked jutsu slot. At least an A. Though the med nin specialty could push it up to S.

I'm going to have to disagree.

His clothing has an ability that lets it mimic up to S-rank elemental armor techs. And he can vary between up to 7 results (since he can combine elements). That alone is an S-rank jutsu slot.

And that is not even taking into account the rest of the abilities.

This would need to take up multiple jutsu slots (at least 1 S-rank for elemental armor, 1 A-rank for med ability), and since it isn't legendary therefore take up multiple special weapon slots as well.

[jameshawking]

Your BBC code is still a mess.I don't see BB Code -shrug-

You haven't addressed my point with the picture.how could I edit the picture once it's accepted?

Still missing how many throwing knives you have sealed.no I'm not. 1 on each bicep.

Does this heal all wounds in a single post, or one wound per post?1 wound per post

I'm going to have to disagree.

His clothing has an ability that lets it mimic up to S-rank elemental armor techs. And he can vary between up to 7 results (since he can combine elements). That alone is an S-rank jutsu slot.

And that is not even taking into account the rest of the abilities.

This would need to take up multiple jutsu slots (at least 1 S-rank for elemental armor, 1 A-rank for med ability), and since it isn't legendary therefore take up multiple special weapon slots as well.1) S-Rank elemental armors, I assume, would have an S-Rank elemental armor effect. This one wouldn't.

2) Healing Hands=/=A-Rank. Healing Hands can also be learned and used by interns, whereas this requires you to be more proficient, hence being both more costly than HH and also harder to obtain.

3) Don't lie to the poor boy, or to me >_> even as an EJ Nin-Spec I can only use three elements, not seven.

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

I don't see BB Code -shrug-

noob.

how could I edit the picture once it's accepted?

How could you edit it if it goes down?

1) S-Rank elemental armors, I assume, would have an S-Rank elemental armor effect. This one wouldn't.

This one has no upper limit. So yes, it could achieve S-rank elemental effect. Might cost 5x as much, but that coincides perfectly with the standard for items. Well, actually, the standard with items would be an S-rank slot + S-rank cost for A-rank effect.

2) Healing Hands=/=A-Rank. Healing Hands can also be learned and used by interns, whereas this requires you to be more proficient, hence being both more costly than HH and also harder to obtain.

Healing hands also requires hand seals. And a jutsu. Jutsu do better at same rank than item equivalents.

3) Don't lie to the poor boy, or to me >_> even as an EJ Nin-Spec I can only use three elements, not seven.

Don't call someone a poor boy while failing to read what I wrote (I'm going to assume you aren't ignoring it on purpose). You can combine elements. So lets say you had 3 elements, Suiton, Raiton, and Dokuton.
You can have:
S
S + D
S + R
S + R + D
D
R
R + D

that is 7 combinations. With a jutsu elemental armor, you only get 1 combination.

[jameshawking]

noob.Not my fault you're not using the most clearly streamlined way to view this.

How could you edit it if it goes down?ask a mod to do it. Which is different from "I want to change the picture"


This one has no upper limit. So yes, it could achieve S-rank elemental effect. Might cost 5x as much, but that coincides perfectly with the standard for items. Well, actually, the standard with items would be an S-rank slot + S-rank cost for A-rank effect....

what?

Where does S+S=A show up anywhere, Neko? Cuz i can get, and have gotten, D-rank effects for D-Rank chakra


Healing hands also requires hand seals. And a jutsu. Jutsu do better at same rank than item equivalents.I'm not saying that it shouldn't make me need a slot, but it's not an A-Rank jutsu effect, the effect is B-Rank



Don't call someone a poor boy while failing to read what I wrote (I'm going to assume you aren't ignoring it on purpose). You can combine elements. So lets say you had 3 elements, Suiton, Raiton, and Dokuton.
You can have:
S
S + D
S + R
S + R + D
D
R
R + D

that is 7 combinations. With a jutsu elemental armor, you only get 1 combination.Where did it say that I can combine effects?

[ShadoClone]

I tried looking at it and gave up... This not only includes a preset weapon list in the armor its also durable to a point.

This would probably cost around 3 slots in my inexperienced opinion because of the customization options you can do once you get the item approved.

[jameshawking]

badumpbumbump

[Oirarana]

Automatically fits to the user (D-Rank chakra) minimal, not worth a slot
Retractable blades sealed inside the forearms, tuned to the user, but otherwise unremarkable. Made out of steel, two feet long, bladed on both edges, three inches thick. (C-Rank to unseal+expand, D to seal)See above
Sealed balanced throwing knives, sealed into the outer biceps of each arm, 8 inches long, steel, one to each arm (D-Rank to unseal)see above
Chakra-sprung boot blades, 4 inches past the boot (D-Rank to push out)
see above
Temperature resistant by 50 degrees Fahrenheit (+/-)
probably D rank, though I'm not too familiar with fahrenheit
Resistant slicing/Slashing (C-Rank resistant), Chest is also resistant to stabbing (C-Rank resistant) C Rank
Filtered sight/Hearing, automatically reducing brightness to usual levels and reducing audio qualities to standard levels in case of sudden spike/drastic change (B-Rank drain for each) C or B
"Firestarter" material, akin to Kaen Koromo no neno (http://www.theninja-forum.com/Vbulletin/showthread.php?t=23294). Flames may occur at the users behest ata location of their choosing
Probably D
"Rebreather", 3C/post Needs much better definition on what it does
Maintains henge for no concentration at triple cost
D rank
Replaces weapon in weapon-related ninjutsu (motions are maintained) (additional C-rank cost) C rank
Can be sealed into the body (C-rank to unseal/wear) minimal, no slot
Sound-reduced padding
Expand on this, how well? At least C rank
Med-Nin Exclusive: Physical wounds (bruises/cuts/slashes/piercings) that occur in combat with this suit on heal, draining a cost of 2B/post, with each wound healing in one post. Only occurs if the shinobi is a standard mednin or higher.
A rank in all probability
Elemental Expression: The suit can, at the will of the user, gain basic elemental properties of one/more of the elements of the wearer. For example: katon will heat up the suit, raiton will create a charge in the suit, at a rate of Rank-1 (C-Rank cost for D-Rank effect, for example). C rank at least




My additions are in purple

I haven't read everything else in this app, but so far, I'm of the opinion 'no'

It would be at the least an S rank, if not legendary. Sure, the effects might not be huge alone, but with so many of them, it bumps it up

[jameshawking]

I'm fine with it being S-rank slot cost, Oir :3

I've acknowledged that it's a very useful item. Also, Kaen Koromo is a no-slot item

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

Not my fault you're not using the most clearly noob way to view this.

fixed your spelling error

ask a mod to do it. Which is different from "I want to change the picture"

ah, right... no. You are going to need a written description than.

what?

Where does S+S=A show up anywhere, Neko? Cuz i can get, and have gotten, D-rank effects for D-Rank chakra

And others have gotten D-rank jutsu effects for free. D-ranks are pretty much treated as a separate category. If you don't believe me, I'm going to tell you to do what you like to tell others to do. Go look through the higher ranked jutsu mimicking accepted weapon apps. It will appear every so often.

I'm not saying that it shouldn't make me need a slot, but it's not an A-Rank jutsu effect, the effect is B-Rank

Um, no. Having to use hand seals, touch the region, and keep your hands on the region for a full post to get the healing is a B-rank effect. This effect is far more powerful in that it takes no concentration, activates instantly, and leaves your hands free.

Where did it say that I can combine effects?

What you said: gain basic elemental properties of one/more of the elements of the wearer

Note the more.

Honestly, even if we didn't have a weapons are weaker than jutsu rule, that ability alone would make this an S-ranked slot. Since, even if you get a lower power to cost ratio that an S-rank jutsu that does the same thing, you have far more variations to choose from (I would maintain this point even if you couldn't combine elements).

Med-Nin Exclusive: Physical wounds (bruises/cuts/slashes/piercings) that occur in combat with this suit on heal, draining a cost of 2B/post, with each wound healing in one post. Only occurs if the shinobi is a standard mednin or higher.

You know, this is missing one key thing. Up to how big of an injury counts as 1 wound? Up to how severe an injury can this heal? If someone pokes a hole in your lung, and it disappears in one post, there is something majorly wrong with this.

[jameshawking]

ah, right... no. You are going to need a written description than.I can't think of one to do it justice. But leather bodysuit with ornate chest-piece seems fine to me.

Um, no. Having to use hand seals, touch the region, and keep your hands on the region for a full post to get the healing is a B-rank effect. This effect is far more powerful in that it takes no concentration, activates instantly, and leaves your hands free.Aren't you the one that got a jutsu accepted that basically said "no, you don't need handseals for a jutsu you choose"?

What you said: gain basic elemental properties of one/more of the elements of the wearerI don't remember writing the more. -shrug- removing it.

Honestly, even if we didn't have a weapons are weaker than jutsu rule, that ability alone would make this an S-ranked slot. Since, even if you get a lower power to cost ratio that an S-rank jutsu that does the same thing, you have far more variations to choose from (I would maintain this point even if you couldn't combine elements).maintain your belief of the point all you'd like. Apparently having S-Ranked effects for S-Rank cost, even for a C-rank technique, is still completely acceptable for a C-Rank technique. So B-for-C would be acceptable for a C-Rank technique as well, logic would lead us to believe.



You know, this is missing one key thing. Up to how big of an injury counts as 1 wound? Up to how severe an injury can this heal? If someone pokes a hole in your lung, and it disappears in one post, there is something majorly wrong with this.there's no clear limit for HH, is there?

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

Aren't you the one that got a jutsu accepted that basically said "no, you don't need handseals for a jutsu you choose"?

Yes. Now I don't see this item taking up an extra A-rank slot for every single jutsu effect it can have, aside from those costs. Neither do I see it being required for you to be ANBU to have this. I also don't see anything about how using any ability causes all other jutsu you are maintaining to stop being maintained.

So, what was your point again?

I don't remember writing the more. -shrug- removing it.

maintain your belief of the point all you'd like. Apparently having S-Ranked effects for S-Rank cost, even for a C-rank technique, is still completely acceptable for a C-Rank technique. So B-for-C would be acceptable for a C-Rank technique as well, logic would lead us to believe.

a) link to this claim that a C lets you use S-rank effect for S-rank cost?

b) with jutsu, if you have a choice between multiple elements, it takes a different slot per element. So this would still be a 3 slot ability.

c) I'm going to assume the B-rank effect for C-rank cost is a typo. Because, even your logic can't be that messed up. I know, dangerous assumption, so I would like you to clarify.

there's no clear limit for HH, is there?

You mean, aside from common sense? Well, actually, you know what, I'm not going to bother making a witty comment. If you want to compare this to HH, state that this can only heal injuries that HH can heal, and that it needs just as much concentration.

[Yuki Aisu]

I'm fine with it being S-rank slot cost, Oir :3

I've acknowledged that it's a very useful item. Also, Kaen Koromo is a no-slot item

Then it can't be a Kisho Clan item, so stop applying for it like it is one.

Also, without an RPC that can even have S-ranks, even if you're fine with it, something needs fixing. >___>;;

[Oirarana]

I said at least S rank, but likely it needs more

Also, you haven't fleshed out the abilities that I pointed out

[kyubichan]

O.o I thought you couldn't have items that manipulate an element that the user does not possess?

[Yuki Aisu]

O.o I thought you couldn't have items that manipulate an element that the user does not possess?
You can't. So like, None can't have a lightning sword. And Yuki can't get a Rock Gauntlet. Ect.

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

You can't. So like, None can't have a lightning sword. And Yuki can't get a Rock Gauntlet. Ect.

But anyone can get an item that uses chakra to magically light a fire?

[Yuki Aisu]

What does that?

o.o;;

Is it his Kaen no Koromo thingeh? The thing that makes sparks?

If it does that, then I was wrong in stamping it [assuming I stamped it] and it should use a legit normal mechanism [like magnesium metal and a knife] instead.

[kyubichan]

Not just the old item but this one too.

"Firestarter" material, akin to Kaen Koromo no neno. Flames may occur at the users behest ata location of their choosing

The second sentence is confusing. Maybe it just needs to be reworded.

[jameshawking]

Well, there are no real edges in this suit, like there was in the normal Kaen Koromo. So the effect would apply at the ridges of the material

[jameshawking]

people rated this thread 5*? Who did that? Anyway, bump for great justice.

yuki, what was their message?

[Kennyrules]

That is just... a ton of low rank special abilities crammed into one item. And yet the only issue/concern I have with it is this:

Med-Nin Exclusive: Physical wounds (bruises/cuts/slashes/piercings) that occur in combat with this suit on heal, draining a cost of 2B/post, with each wound healing in one post. Only occurs if the shinobi is a standard mednin or higher.

Is there an extent to this? As it is stated now, you could potentially lose a limb, but so long as the limb still has the sleeve on it, you could just hold it against where it needs to be, and for 2 B-ranks, you have an auto-reattach feature. I realize that isn't at all what you intend, but it is how it can be interpreted.

I also don't really like that you can completely heal yourself in one post for 2 B-ranks worth of chakra. I think if the wounds are extensive enough, it needs to cost a lot more. One deep cut can cost 2 B-ranks. 50 deep cuts that would normally kill you needs to be a bit more... chakra intensive, since you can essentially bring yourself back from the brink for 2 B-ranks right now. Be a bit more specific with the limits on it and I'll be satisfied.

[jameshawking]

Kenny, no, I can't re-attach things.

But Healing hands heals just about any wound you can possibly have for B-Rank chakra cost. So I figured 2B would be a more fitting cost for an item.

[jameshawking]

my feet hurt

[Nekomata Kayangelus]

people rated this thread 5*? Who did that? Anyway, bump for great justice.

yuki, what was their message?

James, you don't get to bump when you ignore critiques. That isn't bumping, that is spamming.

[N0_0ne]

I think that the healing part is not going to pass since it's just a copy of med-nin jutsu that has no real use if the user is med-nin. I mean why just don't use the things that are allready made. I can understand that autohealing souds nice if you don't have to concetrate on it during a fight and also it can look cool in certain moments. But please wake up. Healing a sword slash wound just by wearing a suit and post after that magicaly launching your atacks aginst an oponent without any wories at all is just OP [Srsly S-rank is the only med tech that can do that and it's so for a good reason]

I think I could go with some healing chakra being waved into the suit which would result in D-ranked healing efects each post and could speed up the healing proces in terms of hours and days, but definitely not this.

Also I think you should take a better look on things that you want to do with this suit. I mean it's great when it does evrything that you can think off, but wouldn't that make fights just totaly easy. I mean what's the point in having an ultimate combat suit that helps you in evry situation. Good ninja could kill you just in common black suit with an simple shuriken. That's the magic and beauty of it all. Evrybody can be exelent with ultimate armors and weapons, but only a few can become legandary with just a simple weapon and strong nindo in their heads.

[jameshawking]

Sorry Neko, I'd assumed that I dealt with the previous crits.

Added the HH limite and the elemental thing was changed previously.

[N0_0ne]

Elemental Expression: The suit can, at the will of the user, gain basic elemental properties of one of the elements of the wearer. For example: katon will heat up the suit, raiton will create a charge in the suit, at a rate of Rank-1 (C-Rank cost for D-Rank effect, for example).

Does this mean that if you'd injected A-ranked chakra it would ignite at the force of a B rank fire jutsu possibly negating oponent's fire jutsu of the same rank? I think it would all go better if you'd just tell us what exactly do you want to do with this, besides the general stuff, because then we are having a hard time helping you with it. Also how would mokuton or dokuton look like, I mean you'd create a tree around yourself or start to form poisionous mist? I just think that this could be either specified for your elemental affinity or canceled completely.


Filtered sight/Hearing, automatically reducing brightness to usual levels and reducing audio qualities to standard levels in case of sudden spike/drastic change (B-Rank drain for each)

I asume that it would also counter shight and hearing regarding genjutsu of and below the same rank, same for the ninjustsu as well right?



To be honest it's not that bad idea at all and I think it has a fair chance of passing, you just have to lissen to the crits and edit the most critical parts: Autohealing, Elemental stuff, and the mentioned Filtration. I'm not saying that you should delete them all, I'm just sugesting a rework that would make them more aceptable.

For example:
Autohealing: limited to only small bruises and cuts [can help to heal up a larger wound over time]
Elemental expresion: I asume that it was just ment to look cool so replace it with a D-rank efect that does that.
Filtration: I think it shouldn't be alowed just to simply counter jutsus as it's a bit of a hax. Just imagine how the poor guy is making all those handseals and bam countered by item.

[jameshawking]

Elemental Expression: The suit can, at the will of the user, gain basic elemental properties of one of the elements of the wearer. For example: katon will heat up the suit, raiton will create a charge in the suit, at a rate of Rank-1 (C-Rank cost for D-Rank effect, for example).

Does this mean that if you'd injected A-ranked chakra it would ignite at the force of a B rank fire jutsu possibly negating oponent's fire jutsu of the same rank? I think it would all go better if you'd just tell us what exactly do you want to do with this, besides the general stuff, because then we are having a hard time helping you with it. Also how would mokuton or dokuton look like, I mean you'd create a tree around yourself or start to form poisionous mist? I just think that this could be either specified for your elemental affinity or canceled completely.For the elemental thing I can easily make it so that only the 5 main elements have their own things (Raiton/Fuuton/Katon/Suiton/Doton), which would clear up almost all the confusion on that part.

But yeah, if I, let's say, injected A-Rank Katon chakra, it'd heat up by a B-Rank effect.


Filtered sight/Hearing, automatically reducing brightness to usual levels and reducing audio qualities to standard levels in case of sudden spike/drastic change (B-Rank drain for each)

I asume that it would also counter shight and hearing regarding genjutsu of and below the same rank, same for the ninjustsu as well right?it wouldn't affect Genjutsu in the slightest, but it would affect Ninjutsu, such as the ones that blow up your ear drums, by turning it down to reasonable levels.


To be honest it's not that bad idea at all and I think it has a fair chance of passing, you just have to lissen to the crits and edit the most critical parts: Autohealing, Elemental stuff, and the mentioned Filtration. I'm not saying that you should delete them all, I'm just sugesting a rework that would make them more aceptable.

For example:
Autohealing: limited to only small bruises and cuts [can help to heal up a larger wound over time]
Elemental expresion: I asume that it was just ment to look cool so replace it with a D-rank efect that does that.
Filtration: I think it shouldn't be alowed just to simply counter jutsus as it's a bit of a hax. Just imagine how the poor guy is making all those handseals and bam countered by item.Healing: I tied it into Healing hands, which is what Neko suggested. Hopefully that'll be acceptable.
Elemental Expression: well, let's see if my current suggestion stands.
Filtration: While it'd be frustrating for him to be countered by an item, you must realize, the item is also sucking the chakra out of me to do it. They could even use a Flashbang, for example, and the suit would drain a B-Rank amount of chakra.

[Lionsbrew]

As was previously stated it cannot be a clan Item since it definitely is of legendary status. Even if there is only one. I dont care if the back story of the suit for it says its passed down or whatever but it cant technically be a clan item of a magnitude such as this.

Also Since it does have so many properties and abilities I cant see this going to any one below the rank of Jounin its just too much.

Either tone it down substantially or let it sit till Seiko is jounin and make it a personal Item. As it stands right now its looking to take up at least one S ranked slot and more.

[Oirarana]

I'd just like to point out, if it does become legendary status, then he'd need the approval of 3 mods to even apply for this

[jameshawking]

Not a Kisho Clan item anymore

[Lionsbrew]

Weapon Name: Clothes


Owner: Kisho Seiko (only one exists)




Still looks like it needs to be reviewed as a legendary item. Also the underlined made me lol and picture Seiko as a highlander.

[jameshawking]

...that's awesome, lions.

[jameshawking]

wait, so, what's the word? Legendary Item?

If that's the deal, I'll apply for it as one.

[Kennyrules]

Still looks like it needs to be reviewed as a legendary item.

It seems that was his opinion. So for the moment, assume yes. On the bright side, you can probably power this up a little if it's going to fit the "legendary" slot.

[jameshawking]

true enough, true enough.

When I'm not in stats class I'll do the proper procedures.