Azure
17-06-2008, 06:39
Critts/Suggestions/Advice/etc. Needed!
I'd like to see this on the standard Jutsu list, failing that I'll submit it as a custom Jutsu.
Name: Makyō Hyō Shō [Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors]
Requirements: N/A
Rank: B
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Hyouton
Fighting Style: Physical
Range: Short to Mid Range (0-12 meters)
Description:
After performing the few required hand seals, the user begins to chill the air around them, and then form a dome of twenty-one ice mirrors in an approximate 10 meter radius around their opponent(s) trapping them inside.
Each ice mirror has a height of 7 feet, a width of 3 feet and a depth of 1 foot, and are arranged so that there are twelve ice mirrors at ground level, eight above the first twelve that are on a 45 degree angle toward the ground, and one final mirror above the rest that faces directly at the ground.
Once all of the ice mirrors have been fully formed the user can enter into any of the ice mirrors and have their exact image reflected in every ice mirror.
Each ice mirror can withstand up to three medium strikes or one heavy strike before they shatter, falling into large shards of ice. A Kunai will do little damage whilst a standard Shuriken or Senbon will cause little to no more than small scratches and/or chips.
All standard elemental resistances and weaknesses apply.
Perks:
Whilst travelling between the ice mirrors, the users movements become extremely hard to keep track of, as they become a barely visable blur of motion.
The user can launch physical attacks and cast Jutsu from inside an ice mirror unhindered as if they were not inside it at all.
Pitfalls:
If by chance the particular ice mirror that the user is currently residing in is broken, it shall inflict half the amount of damage to any and all of their person that occupied it at the time in the form of blunt trauma, breaking the users conentration, and therefore ending the jutsu.
Individual ice mirrors cannot be automatically replaced when broken; to do this the Jutsu would need to be stopped and cast again from scratch, or another Jutsu that could create said replicas would need to be employed.
This technique drains a moderate amount of chakra to maintain, therefore the user must either spend a B-rank worth of chakra every other post, or their movement speed will be reduced by 1 level on every other post (eg. average becomes below average becomes bad, and etc.) making them easier to track and attack.
(All levels of reduction are removed in the case of the user renewing the Jutsu's chakra)
After Effects:
All gained perks are lost when the Jutsu is ended.
All gained negative effects continue to hinder the user after the Jutsu is ended for a period equal to the amount of posts since it was last renewed, reducing at the same rate they were gained.
Training Time:
7 pages = Basic Knowledge
10 pages = One Handseal Required - OHR
13 pages = Half Concentration Required - HCR
16 pages = Chakra Consumption Halved - CCH
I'd like to see this on the standard Jutsu list, failing that I'll submit it as a custom Jutsu.
Name: Makyō Hyō Shō [Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors]
Requirements: N/A
Rank: B
Type: Elemental Ninjutsu
Element: Hyouton
Fighting Style: Physical
Range: Short to Mid Range (0-12 meters)
Description:
After performing the few required hand seals, the user begins to chill the air around them, and then form a dome of twenty-one ice mirrors in an approximate 10 meter radius around their opponent(s) trapping them inside.
Each ice mirror has a height of 7 feet, a width of 3 feet and a depth of 1 foot, and are arranged so that there are twelve ice mirrors at ground level, eight above the first twelve that are on a 45 degree angle toward the ground, and one final mirror above the rest that faces directly at the ground.
Once all of the ice mirrors have been fully formed the user can enter into any of the ice mirrors and have their exact image reflected in every ice mirror.
Each ice mirror can withstand up to three medium strikes or one heavy strike before they shatter, falling into large shards of ice. A Kunai will do little damage whilst a standard Shuriken or Senbon will cause little to no more than small scratches and/or chips.
All standard elemental resistances and weaknesses apply.
Perks:
Whilst travelling between the ice mirrors, the users movements become extremely hard to keep track of, as they become a barely visable blur of motion.
The user can launch physical attacks and cast Jutsu from inside an ice mirror unhindered as if they were not inside it at all.
Pitfalls:
If by chance the particular ice mirror that the user is currently residing in is broken, it shall inflict half the amount of damage to any and all of their person that occupied it at the time in the form of blunt trauma, breaking the users conentration, and therefore ending the jutsu.
Individual ice mirrors cannot be automatically replaced when broken; to do this the Jutsu would need to be stopped and cast again from scratch, or another Jutsu that could create said replicas would need to be employed.
This technique drains a moderate amount of chakra to maintain, therefore the user must either spend a B-rank worth of chakra every other post, or their movement speed will be reduced by 1 level on every other post (eg. average becomes below average becomes bad, and etc.) making them easier to track and attack.
(All levels of reduction are removed in the case of the user renewing the Jutsu's chakra)
After Effects:
All gained perks are lost when the Jutsu is ended.
All gained negative effects continue to hinder the user after the Jutsu is ended for a period equal to the amount of posts since it was last renewed, reducing at the same rate they were gained.
Training Time:
7 pages = Basic Knowledge
10 pages = One Handseal Required - OHR
13 pages = Half Concentration Required - HCR
16 pages = Chakra Consumption Halved - CCH