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Kadajin
26-04-2008, 02:35
Clan Name: Seizonsha Clan

Village: Konoki

Main Element: Wood

Head Leader: Seizonsha, Mikoyose (NPC)

Type: Ninjutsu


Symbol:

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A Trinity symbol that represents the three tribes of the Seizonsha clan.



Style: The style varies from member to member in the Seizonsha clan. Everyone has their own fighting style whatever they desire, since the clan is affiliated with the Wood element, they are usually defensive but nobody in the clan has to follow that style necessarily.

Social Standing:

Politically:

The Kubin tribe has the biggest impact directly to the government than any other tribe of the clan. However, overall they have little political influence. They are very charismatic and have provided recommendations for certain village issues which have allowed the village to revitalize even after so many recent wars, the clan has acted as a commissions.

Economically:

The Seizonsha clan is as a whole a very wealthy clan. Certain tribes are not as wealthy as other tribes in the clan. All of the clan practices necromancy since it is part of their beliefs, so the clan usually produces some of the best alchemist and scientists in Seichi.

Socially:

The Seizonsha clan is well-respected throughout the land of Konoki. Certainly admired because of their intelligence, charisma, and will. Some people considered them lunatics based on some of their ideals and practices, others are afraid of them, and others support them.



# of RPC Members Allowed: Unlimited

Description:

The Seizonsha clan is divided into three tribes called the Trinity. Each tribe is represents a certain nature which their ideals are based on, they are Earth, Hell, and Heaven.


Kubin Tribe

The Kubin tribe represents the Earth nature. That being said, they are the mediator of all clan issues as well as have the largest population of any tribe. They are stern and just, they practice farming, hunting, and many other outdoor skills. The produce the best scientists, farmers, survivors, and builders. Their elemental affinities are usually Earth, Wood, Sand, and Water. They also are more oriented with Taijutsu. Their attire colors are usually brown and green.

Devi Tribe

The Devi Tribe represents the Hell nature. The have the smallest population and their beliefs are based on Social Darwinism. They are probably the most radical tribe as well, though they quarrel with other tribes at times, for the most part all the tribes compromise. They practice Necromancy, Alchemy, Witchcraft, and other sciences. They produce the best medical shinobis and doctors. Their elemental affinities are usually Poison, Fire, and Ice. They are also good at Genjutsu, some of them. Their attire colors are usually Black, Purple, and Gray.

Sheol Tribe

The Sheol Tribe represents the Heaven nature. They are the most pacifist and tranquil tribe of all. They have survived because of the aid of the other tribes, because they are loyal. They practice meditation and study philosophy. They produce the best teachers, shinobi, and monks. Their elemental affinities are usually Wind and Lightning. They are usually the best at Ninjutsu out of all the tribes. Their attire colors are usually White, Yellow, and Blue.

Important Members:

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Seizonsha, Mikoyose

The head of the Kubin tribe and the mediator for all clan issues. A practitioner of necromancy and earth elements. It is rumored that he can summon the dead using the power of Gaia. However, he has never been successful at it. He is a wealthy politician in Konoki from his excellent public speaking skills and his negotiating abilities. He has had a great influence on the development of so many structures in Konoki. People regard him as one of the people that saved the village from complete depression.


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Seizonsha, Ryugauga

A very courageous teen that just goes to the road that life takes him by. He is a bit of a lone wolf and goes out to the wilderness whenever he desires, although he is from the Kubin tribe, he has really followed the ways of the Sheol. He has excellent wood and water manipulation as well as a good archer. He is very friendly and gets along well with most people, but do not underestimate him, he is just as much intelligent and witty as any other Seizonsha.

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Seizonsha, Spetzsaya

A very intelligent yet fierce woman. Contrary to her siblings, she is much more rebellious and follows the ways of the Devi tribe. She is a medical specialist in Konoki, she works for private companies as well performing experiments and creating poisonous weapons. She is also friendly to most people but has a short temper.


Background:

The clans roots date back to the days of Horizon. The Seizonsha began with a single woman that discovered her child would be born very sick and possibly die. She was the first ever medical specialist, she would always heal the sick and wounded with her herbal medicine. Every one loved her and depended on her, until she began a journey to find a medicine that could cure an unborn child. A rather difficult task indeed, she started off at Horizon, where the casualties of the war were the primary reason to this sick condition. The baby had been infected with the polluted gases caused by the different types of jutsus.

Her journey had lead her to Konoki, where there was rumored to be an elixir of the phoenix. It was rumored that the elixir could heal all wounds and diseases. She encountered the wolf demon and discovered that the elixir was inside the beast, she challenged it but failed. The "demon" spared her life, and told her the truth, that the elixir could indeed heal any wounds and diseases but at the price of one's life. She told the demon to give the elixir to her, that she did not care if she would die, all she wanted was to save her child. The wolf "demon" admired her love for her child and gave her the elixir, she drank it, and soon after the baby was born, she died.

The baby grew up to be special, having a strong affinity for many elements, his name was Mikoyose. He grew up in the wilderness, and fought off many beasts and animals, he was granted the name of Survivor, Seizonsha. He then fell in love with a witch, she was on a journey to learn how to resurrect the dead, Mikoyose always wanted to see his mother, therefore they have continued on with their journey. She taught him how to be a good speaker and how to become better with elements. They had three children, each representing the natures of Hell, Heaven and Earth. The Earth child is Yoshina, King of the Kubin Tribe and father of Kadajin.

The three siblings have created the tribes and now discuss issues with each other and consult their parents the founders of the clan.

Special Attributes: A bloodline will soon be posted. Other special attributes are elf like features, a variety of hair colors based on their element, and also strong bones.

Strengths:

High endurance

Strong Element Affinity

Intelligent

Charismatic

Shortcomings:

Low Flexibility

Low Stamina

Conceited

Impatient

Missy
27-04-2008, 14:35
This clan...has three clans in it, sorry 'tribes'. How does one define what tribe you are from in the apps?

Kadajin
27-04-2008, 14:44
By putting the name of what tribe you are from in your background or your name, because eventhough they are distinct, you can still have the odd balls that although should be in one tribe, they are in another.

Missy
27-04-2008, 14:48
I understand how you are able to have contradicting things in your Description of the clan due to differing tribes, but you state that the Kubins pretty much run the clan politics, that didn't quite answer what kind of political power the clan has, The description is done pretty good, but in my opinion I think that should be answered. Even if it isn't known by the public you should tell 'us' so that we don't go "H4-h4x - thats God mode".

Kadajin
27-04-2008, 15:01
Well its pretty much a grey area, its not like we actually control the government just an influence, they act as commissions they make recommendations, the public does not know that.

Nekomata Kayangelus
29-04-2008, 03:06
1. so the clan usually produces the best alchemist and scientists in Seichi

This would be "some of the best" really. Especially for the scientist part, since how good a scientist your RPC is, depends on how much you know. I don't like the way the sentence seems to exclude others from being able to compete in those fields.

2. Just for reference, necromancy, withcraft, and such aren't sciences. They are pseudosciences. Just random grammatical thingy.

3. I don't know if you are allowed to have a clan that were at one time the saviors of a major village, without having a good quantity of numbers. I'm not sure, but that has to probably be approved by Afro since it is his village.

4. For the demon, I would suggest finding a synonym for it and replacing the term "demon" with that.

Kadajin
30-04-2008, 02:52
1. edited

2. Yea I know.

3. Hmm we will see.

4. Edited

Side note: Do you think a bloodline that involves all of the elements be accepted, look at James's BL app, or should it revolve around one or two elements?

kyubichan
30-04-2008, 21:54
They practice Necromancy, Alchemy, Witchcraft, and other sciences.

What, how? How do those even fit into this RP?

And we'll wait for Afro's comment on this clan too.

Kadajin
30-04-2008, 23:18
They are not shinobis Kyubichan, and like Neko, said they are pseudosciences.

kyubichan
06-05-2008, 22:12
Have you prodded Afro?

Also... necromancy can 'presumably' raise the dead...

Those are supposedly supernatural things and we do not allow supernatural things in this RP (aside from the fact that we have jutsu) because:

a. Jutsu cost chakra/stamina to perform. Things like witchcraft don't. If they did cost something, would we have to make a whole new set of rules for /one/ clan?
b. It would open up the floodgates for demons. Demons = out of control RPCs

Unlike the other clans that I have accepted or even seen before, the way you made this clan seems to have established that those pseudosciences are possible. How will it stop your RPC from raising the dead without a jutsu? How will it stop other RPers to create a carbon copy clan and THEN make their RPCs raise the dead?

You get the gist: An RPC can believe in those things, but to imply that they can actually be practiced/done is a no-no.

Kadajin
06-05-2008, 22:19
Afro is always busy apparently...

I know...

I know there is only one jutsu that involves necromancy, but they just believe in it not actually practice it, just rumors that they can do certain things, and it is only rumors that the clan leader can sucessfully raise the dead.

a. Do not worry about it, witchcraft will not influence jutsus in no way, it will deal with stuff like alchemy and animinism mixed together.

b.No I am not going to extend it that way.

My RPC does not have any knowledge of it, and if he does learn to raise the dead it will be as you said, through Shinkon. It will be more strict for RPCs as oppose to NPCs.

Okay so you want a different wording or something?

AfroNinja
07-05-2008, 02:42
I really disapprove of the political influences to be honest. It makes it sound like you run the damned government by saying everything is done secretly. Considering I practically built Konoki I'm going to have to ask you to dumb it down.

Looking over everything else...I honestly don't know if I really like this clan much. It seems like you are trying to make them the best clan in everything.

Kadajin
07-05-2008, 03:02
After looking at the categories I want to make it focused on supernatural. Just a tad of everything else.

OKay I will change things, thank you for responding Afro.

kyubichan
07-05-2008, 04:35
It just needed some work on the wording. An RPC, clan or organization is free to believe in something, to conduct their experiments to try and prove their beliefs, and create their own principles... but it must be clearly stated in the clan profile that all these things are based on their own conviction and has never been actually proven.

Kadajin
09-06-2008, 00:24
The clan has been updated, political power toned down, and emphasis on necromancy being experimental has been complete.

Senshi_Kodo
09-06-2008, 01:15
Well, I found nothing wrong with it. It seems those who have been here before me had helped it become perfect. Is there anything else you would want to change before I stamp?

Kadajin
09-06-2008, 01:18
Nothing more Senshi, remember i too am a critiquer.

Senshi_Kodo
09-06-2008, 01:31
I remember, though I don't understand what you mean.



Stamp away...

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Kadajin
09-06-2008, 01:33
Just means I have experience so it wont have as many mistakes as an average Joe app would.

kyubichan
09-06-2008, 01:56
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